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Master Ben's comics
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Finally I'm back from my vacation. We'll here is the 1-?.
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Ugh that Ben sprite looks just terrible, the colors are disgusting at the least.
As for the comic the layout is awful and the text goes over the speech bubbles. Its to early for me to rate it but keep trying. |
yeah,keep trying i know you can do it!
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Try not using colors that are so bright, alos it looks a little disorganized.
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I agree with the above use less bright neon colouration and in the mum/eggs scene try to fit the speach into the bubbles 3/10 overall
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I agree with the things above, but one thing disturbs me, how come a person Ben randomly meets somewhere outside town gives him a Pokémon just like that?
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