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Jesus Freak Josh December 26th, 2005 3:14 PM

Tour De Hoenn
 
Hiya, start of Summer holidays so I figured I might start a sprite comic. This is about a person named Josh that is touring some people around Hoenn.

WARNING: Some references not intended for young children. Mild references though.
1 - Littleroot Town
2 - Route 101
3 - Oldale Town

Current Episode:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v482/Batesymon/ep3.png

Credist:
My brother for spelling "credits" wrong in our Christmas movie. :p
Meowth346's Charsets for the three characters
Map received using AdvanceMap (ROM Hacking Tool)
MS Paint being my pallete.

Dragon-Chan December 26th, 2005 3:37 PM

Hmmm....finally, someone who doesn't use TUP for their comics. Good grammar, yay, and you bothered to actually SHADE the recolor without DEFAULT MSPAINT COLORS, yaay. I think I saw a suggestive theme in there, though, so you may want to post a warning.
6/10, but I need to see mor eppies.

Jesus Freak Josh December 26th, 2005 3:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dragon-Chan
Hmmm....finally, someone who doesn't use TUP TUP? for their comics. Good grammar, yay, and you bothered to actually SHADE the recolor without DEFAULT MSPAINT COLORS, yaay. Do'h. Sorry. This was off a charset. Forgot to give credit. I'm an idiot. Lower my score if you want. I think I saw a suggestive theme in there, though, so you may want to post a warning. Is that the "cookie" thing.
6/10, but I need to see mor eppies.

*needs to edit first post* Thanks for the review.

Dragon-Chan December 26th, 2005 4:54 PM

No, forgetting to give credit doesn't lower your score much. nd I think it's both those "how does she do that" and the whole cookie panel.
Anyway, your comic is betetr than most i've seen, and before I can grade it exactly properly I need to see more. Keep up the good work!

Jesus Freak Josh December 29th, 2005 1:42 PM

Okay Episode 3 (Oldale Town) is now up.

brotlov December 29th, 2005 1:51 PM

OHHHHH that Oldale town is cruel, the spearow killed the woman, OHHHHH that's funny!

Jesus Freak Josh December 29th, 2005 3:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by brotlov
OHHHHH that Oldale town is cruel, the spearow killed the woman, OHHHHH that's funny!

Thanks. I decided I'd write her out because I didn't want to have to think of a name, I had spare frames so I went "Yeah, I'll write her out. Josh can dump her and then Spearow can kill her".

Kinzu_kiwi December 29th, 2005 4:01 PM

Humurous, to say the least. it's pretty good, so I guess you should keep it up.

Jesus Freak Josh December 29th, 2005 4:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kinzu_kiwi
Humurous, to say the least. it's pretty good, so I guess you should keep it up.

Thank you.

I won't be back online 'till at least Monday. However, my Grandma may have internet (That's where I'll be)

Dragon-Chan December 29th, 2005 4:40 PM

You'll definetely want to warn readers about blpodshed, violence, suggestive themes, but the new comics were good and funny :)

Jesus Freak Josh December 29th, 2005 4:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dragon-Chan
You'll definetely want to warn readers about blpodshed, violence, suggestive themes, but the new comics were good and funny :)

I'm going to tone it down later any how.


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