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pokey a.k.a espeon March 18th, 2004 8:39 PM

Battle to victory(Pg13:cussing,blood)
 
It was the final battle in the silver confrence and also our last pokemon.
Pokey my Espeon vs Princess my rival's Delcatty."Pokey Psychic"I told him.
The attack was succesful but it didn't do a whole lot of damage."Princess
Double edge"my rival commanded.It struck Pokey hard making it fly torwards me and knocking me down."****" I thought."We have to dodge these attacks
or it's all over"I told Pokey."Okay Pokey Psybeam"I yelled."Princess dodge it
and then use double edge"And she did just what she was told."Pokey dodge it"Pokey jumped out of the way just in time."Psychic"I told him.This time
it did hit Princess."Princess use your best double edge"This attack hit Pokey
so hard he started throwing up blood."Pokey are you okay?"I asked him.
He didn't answer,he just threw some more blood and fainted."Pokey is unable
to battle Princess is the winner"Then the sun suddenly turned morning bright
kinda like........like Pokey was using morning sun.Then a miracle happened Pokey slowly got up."WHAT,POKEY CAN'T DO THAT"My rival screamed.
"HE HAS THAT STUPID FOCUSBAND""Oh shut the **** up"I tolded my rival
wipping the blood from my mouted."Princess has that ****en pink bow to power up her cheap *** double edges""Oh what the ****"my rival said"Let's
just start the battle."Princess double edge attack""Pokey dodge it and use
psychic"And BAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!That did it we won the battle and became champions."Princess is unable to battle Pokey wins the match""W-we did it Pokey we won"After the battle we told Princess and her trainer good battle.
"I'm going to the Hoenn regoin"I said"Where you headed""Hoenn" she answered."Alright"I said"See you in the Hoenn league"She nodded and my journey to Hoenn began.

What did you think of this story,tell me if I should tell what happened to me and Pokey.

Okay peoples I know This thread don't make sense but I had a sucky story
that I wanted to get rid of so I replaced it with this one but can't change it.If any one knows how please tell me.

osceya.k.a.eevee March 27th, 2004 3:51 PM

How did Pokey get the strenth to win?
 
yes I think you should tell what happened to you and pokey at the Heon league.

pokey a.k.a espeon March 31st, 2004 5:05 PM

Eliza the Plusle and Minun trainer.(Pg13 for one cuss word)
 
In the deep woods near Littleroot town Pokey and I were well LOST."HELLOOOOOOO"I shouted."Anyone here?"When no body answered I was starting to get creeped out."Hey"Someone's voice cried out."Your're a pokemon trainer."Then a teenage girl rushed torward us."Hi""Hi" I answered
back.The girl was a teenager that had Gorgous black long hair and what was I?A twelve year old with short brown hair in a ponytail that always stuck up.
(I envied her)"I'm Eliza and um..........c-can you uh..catch me a p-pokemon"
"I-I'll even lead you to Littleroot town""Okay"I quickly responded."Great"
And so we were off to look for pokemon.We looked for hours and hours but no pokemon."Awww,how cute"Eliza said out of the blue."Huh what's cute"
I asked."Look"she told me"A Plusle and a Minun""Can you catch em""Sure"I replied."Pokey psybeam"I commanded.He hit the Plusle."Okay Ultraball go"I flung the yellow pokeball at the electric pokemon.The ball wiggled and then stopped."Here"I said"Call Plusle out I'm funna teach you how to catch a pokemon""Alright"she replied"GOOOO Plus""Now"I said"Tell..er..Plus to use to
Thunderwave""Plus Thunder wave attack"Eliza commanded."See this pokeball"I said "Throw it at the Minun"She launched it at the blue dude and the same result happended."I-I caught my first pokemon""Okay umm.."
"Laura"I interupted."Yeah now for your part of the deal"She lead me to the town in thirty minutes."Wow"I said "we're here""We're ****en here"

Next story:Mischievious Mudkip

Shinin March 31st, 2004 5:25 PM

that's a great story!
it has a lot of bleeped swears, but i don't care (i always swear ;))

Steeleon March 31st, 2004 5:39 PM

Good story keep it up. This may soudn stupid but I like the way yu use swears.

flamegirl April 1st, 2004 5:55 PM

yo pokey

kool story^_^

pokey a.k.a espeon April 6th, 2004 3:22 PM

Mischevious Mudkip Pg13 (Cussing)
 
Now that I was at Littleroot town my next stop was Prof. Birches lab.I spotted it and rushed torward it.Then All of a sudden I fell in a hole.
"HEY" I screamed."Who put this ****en hole here"Eliza and Pokey were
peeking down the hole."Laura you o.k." Eliza said with concern."Yeah"
"Here grab this rope"Eliza said as she threw a rope down to me.I ferocously
climbed up.Right after I climbed up we heard laughter.It was from a baby
Mudkip.I was so pissed I launched an Ultraball at it.Mudkip was caught.
Then a fat dude in lab coat approached us."Y-you caught that Mudkip"
He said "Jelous" I asked"No but happy"He answered.I looked at him like he was crazy.He musta noticed it because he quickly said"You see that Mudkip
causes trouble around here and well I want you to have her""So you're
letting me have her"I asked"Yes""But aren't you going to give her to a beggining trainer""No they can't handle her""But how do you know I can"
"Well because I saw you at the Silver confrence and also I've heard about you from Prof. Oak and Elm""Y-you heard abou...Hey you're Prof Birch"
"Right and I've already got you upgraded Pokedex""Cool""Here it is"
Prof.Birch said as he handed me the Pokedex."I heard you like speedy pokemon"He continued."There's a Pokerace in Oldale town coming"
"Well you should enter""O.k""But you should rest at my house"HELLLLL
YEAH"I screamed"I GET A NEW POKEMON AND POKEDEX IN ONE DAY"
"Well"Birch"Let's go to my house"And we were off to Birches house.

Next time:The first encounter of Team Aqua

flamegirl April 6th, 2004 4:11 PM

when r u gonna make the next one?

pokey a.k.a espeon April 9th, 2004 3:35 PM

The first encounter of Team Aqua(PG13CUSSING)
 
When we got there Eliza and I were greeted by the professer's wife and son, Brendan."So this is the Silver Confrence champ" Brendan said."I did'nt know
that you were a girl""Don't I have a ****en girl's name"I said annoyed."Heh sorry my dad did'nt tell me your name"After that un pleasant conversation we had dinner and went to bed or to couch I should say.(Eliza and I had to sleep on the ****en couches)I slept pretty good till we heard a window break."What's going on here"Professer Birch shouted as everyone ran to the living room.There I saw a man with a blue bandana."So Birch"He said"Where's
naughty Mudkip""I have her"I answered"Give er here or face Team Aqua's
wrath""Team Aqua?"I thought"Man just after I kick Team Rocket's ***""So kid are you going to give er up""**** na""I said"Not without a fight""GO KIP" I said as I flung the ball in the air releasing Mudkip."GO POOCHEYENA"The aqua yelled."Kip watergun"I told her as was spraying Poochyena."Poochyena tackle"He commanded.The puppy tackled Kip down she still stood strong.
"WATERGUN ONE MORE TIME"I yelled.That did it we won."**** you're strong kid"the grunt said as he ran away."Thanks Laura"Birch said"Well tomorrow's
the race and you two should be on your way"He led us to route 101 and Eliza
and I were on our way.

Next time:The great Oldale race

pokey a.k.a espeon April 9th, 2004 11:43 PM

Special previews!!!!!!!!!!
 
Titles:Speical no. 1 Kyogre's wrath
Special no. 2 Groudon's revenge(Diffrent main character likr Rikou special
Special no. 3 Legend of the angel Espeon
Dates? When I feel like writing them.
More details later.(It's going to take a while to make them but it's going to be big,lot's of gore and cussing

flamegirl April 11th, 2004 3:02 PM

thatz cool pokey

did ja write em yet?

pokey a.k.a espeon April 11th, 2004 7:47 PM

more stuff!!!!!!!
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by flamegirl
thatz cool pokey

did ja write em yet?

I might be able to put drawing from the story.My mom's boyfriend work has a scanner thingy.Oh yeah I came up with another special.
Snecial no.5 life with Laura(Pokey narrates).And no Flamegirl I did'nt write em yet/

Cassie-chan April 12th, 2004 2:20 PM

Well, the story's pretty good. The swearing bothers me a little, but other than that, I like the story.

flamegirl April 12th, 2004 5:20 PM

ok when i said "did ja write em yet?" i meant do you have them planned out yet?

and does Lonnie's scanner actually work?

Ron_2o04 April 12th, 2004 6:37 PM

LMAO what in the world made u write a tory like that?

flamegirl April 12th, 2004 6:41 PM

whatz wrong w/ a story like that??

Ron_2o04 April 12th, 2004 6:44 PM

i never said anything waz wrong with it i jus mean what gave him the idea for something like that

Ron_2o04 April 12th, 2004 6:46 PM

Right now ima pissed cuz i wanna play pokemon lg anf fr and cant cuz its jap and i dont understand hw to translate the **** thing

Ron_2o04 April 12th, 2004 6:47 PM

and talking like this is a drag cuz im on 56k and it takes forever to load

flamegirl April 12th, 2004 6:48 PM

are you downloading an RPG?

Shadow April 13th, 2004 9:36 AM

Ron 2o04, that is off-topic, triple posting, and in other words SPAM... Please refrain from doing that. You post before that was also kind of rude laughing at pokey aka espeon's idea...

pokey a.k.a espeon April 14th, 2004 4:26 PM

Thanks
 
Thanks Shodow and Flamegirl for sticking up for me.

flamegirl April 14th, 2004 4:51 PM

no problem pokey^_^

cool pic. where'd ja find it?

pokey a.k.a espeon April 14th, 2004 6:07 PM

Bad news
 
Okay peoples I can't put my drawings.unless it's my avatar.

flamegirl April 14th, 2004 7:11 PM

where did you find the picture?????

PS. can i see your drawings 2-morrow?


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