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Pokemon Exterminators
Please go to the new thread kthxbai
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Can I join? You still ahev my sprites right?
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Ojay. Can't wait to see more this comic looks exciting! I wonder which Pokemon eevee will evolve into
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Very Good Comic, Decepticon ^^ I May Join It, But Not Now...
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ooh, this is kinda cool. So is the main character in the current a member of the exterminators, and the first comic is really how he became one?
Name: Kyle Age: 15 Pokemon: Espeon (F)(lv. 50), Umbreon (M)(lv. 50), Dragonite (F)(lv. 56) Personality/Background: Kyle Originally worked on his fathers breeding ranch, but when Kyle's mother was killed, Kyle's father became traumatized and went insane, and began attempting to kill the pokemon. One night while his father was drunk, Kyle let the pokemon out, but caught two Eevees and a mysterious egg that had been left behind, which hatched into a Dratini. These pokemon he trained until he went to the Sevii Islands in search of the Move Tutor which could teach the ultimate moves. Sprites: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/dragonzlair2/redwally.png |
Unlike most comics these days (not offence anyone) this actually seems quite interesting. The plot is decent, but the thing that appealed to me the most was your way of writing. The battle text is a little hard to read, though. I'm not going to rate this comic yet, it's way too early for that, but I have high expectations, don't let me down ^_~
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@Smarties-Kun: Thanks :) I dont know what you mean by my way of writing though XD I'll change the battle text then... and I wont let you down or I'll try not too :\ |
By way of writing I meant that I like it when the story is in a past tense. For some reason I tend to like it when someone's telling what has happened, rather than something happening. That way the character can express how he felt at the moment and actually make it sound natural. And good spelling and grammar is always good to see.
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Ooh! Yea! Go Dragonair! >=)
Haha! I left you with your Eevee to defeat Hypno! Mwaha! |
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http://www.spellcheck.net/ >__>; @Silon: Yeah you did you creep T-T ok wait.. that was my idea XD |
Omf! "So Darien let me tag along, personally I think he was scared to go in the forest by himself." **** you. XD
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it may or may not be true :paranoid: |
Application:Member of pokemon exterminaters
Name:Corbin Age:12 Pokemon: lvl:35 Metang lvl: 36 Gorebyss lvl:38 Jolteon personality/backround:When Corbin was young his father died....And now he walks sevii islands to accomplish his fathers dream...To become pokemon Champion. His own personality is quiet and he likes to be alone with his pokemon to dicuss new battle tactics, But in battle hes totally opposite. He likes to have adventures and help the powerless and the weak, thats why he joined pokemon exterminators. Trainer Sprites: I couldent find any over world sprites if u could give me any one u want u could do that |
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Can I be in my bios are:
Adam: a world champion, genius, serious when he has to be, can understand every Pokemon, can move things with his mind, ties not to belittle his sister Holly, has a snag machine to catch shadow Pokemon. Holly: Can also understand Pokemon and is telepathic with Adam she is a little jealous about Adam getting all the glory and good stuff so he tries to get her stuff as well, she wears a full body snag machine to catch shadow pokemon Mew: Adam's first Pokemon and most loyal, always cracking jokes, and never seen without her neckerchief since she got it in the Mysterious dungeon, never goes in her Pokeball, doesn't like it, very friendly towards humans http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a220/adam148/Newoverworlds.png http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a220/adam148/HollySuperSnagMachine.png |
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@Smarties-Kun: Yeah, I've seen alot of comics like that. @Adam_148: this is from the first post: Age: Pokemon: (No legends please, if you want a legend that bad, I may have you catch it IN the comic) I can make an acception for the mew, you can start with it. but no more legends after that, I also need to know what other pokemon you have if any. |
okay thank u decepticon! good luck with comic! :)
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Name: Adam Age:13 Pokemon: Mew, Chikorita, Charizard, Bonsly, Charmander* Personality/Background:I told you that already Can you have him catch Lucario/Rukario in the series *http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a220/adam148/AdamsRedRescueForce.png This Charmander |
He'll need full walking sprites. o_o
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Sunflorazumarill wants to be in this comic!
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SFAM why do you use the exact same description FOR EVERY COMIC!?
Change it once in a while to make it seem you atleast HALF CARE about the comic. Anyway love the new comic Deception lol, Hopefully it will be as good as your other ones. |
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Aw. Don't be so mean to him. I use pretty much the same stuff for Silon/Darien.. --;
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I dont meen to be mean but its true! She dosent CARE about peoples comics just seeing her character in it. Search her name for posts most of them consist of that exact same application or her asking when her dam character is in! *sigh* sorry had to get that off my chest.
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