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((Are you accusing me of being gender-biased?))
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...Plasma, you should maybe ignore some people's comments. I think your story is quite interesting but I still want you to make your chapters longer. I want a 10-15 minute read not a 2 minute read. Good job anyway and ... you don't have to do those ((__)) stuff... It's fanfictions not RPs ^^;
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NO i WAS TRYING TO CRITISIZE i TOLD i AM NOT GOOD AT THIS!
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Chapter Thirteen: A Seperate Piece
Notes: Okay, that was a real rip-off title, but I am using it properly. Okay, here we go... and ~___~ is telepathic speech by Lance, formerly Celebi, and now, Lugia. "If only I knew what?" Suddenly the man was quite interested in me. ~You wouldn't understand.~ "What wouldn't I understand?" ~It's a winding story. Look, I'm sorry for snapping at you, but I dislike being called dumb. It's rude and appalling.~ "I'm sorry, then, too. By the way, my name is Gary Oak. You know, you're quite small for a Lugia... are you a baby?" ~I'm only 11, so maybe I am...~ "11? You're implying a human trait there..." ~That's because I was human, you freak!~ "You think I'm a freak!?" Gary seemed quite furious. "You're the freak! You're trying to get me to believe you used to be human? Well, I ain't buying it!" I grabbed him by the collar with my mouth, and flung him towards the nearest landmass. I couldn't tell if he landed on land because I threw him so far... ~What did I do to deserve this?~ "Lugia?" A voice was calling me from behind. Turns out it was Wally, surfing on his Dragonite, Star. "Hey, Lugia," Wally stated plainly. ~Wally!?~ I was quite shocked he was all the way out here. ~Where am I?~ "You're way off the coast of Dewford. What's a Lugia doing all the way out here, though?" ~Think carefully, you dolt.~ Wally shook his head in thought. Suddenly the proverbial light bulb flashed in his head. "I get it now, you're Lance!" ~Gee, how'd you know?~ I had a sarcastic tone. "Who else would call me a dolt?" Wally grinned, satisfied he'd found me. I simply growled at him. ~I'm still ticked you're with the Rockets, Wally.~ "Eh, I quit the Rockets. Actually, I got kicked out." ~Why?~ "Because I insisted on finding you to return your Pokemon..." I gave his face a little lick. ~I suppose we can still be friends, then.~ "That's only if you want to be friends, though." I wasn't sure whether a Lugia could smile, but I did my best effort to. ~I'd love to be your friend. Hop on, and I'll give you a ride back to Pallet.~ "You know the way?" I shook my head. "Don't worry, I'll help you out..." He hopped on my back, and I took off. Star came out behind me, and I went in the directions Wally pointed towards. It took several hours, but we finally arrived in Pallet Town again. As soon as I landed, I put Wally down and gave him a friendly nudge with my head. It was good to have my best friend back... Notes: I know this chapter is short, oni flygon, but I personally prefer making more short chapters. I promise my next story will be better... |
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