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Solemnity June 11th, 2006 10:09 PM

Pokemon Velocity
 

Yo! This is my first comic...:bandit:

Story
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A young boy named Luke and his friend think a meteor is going to hit fortree city. They try to warn the townspeople but are ignored. But something happens that will make the townspeople never doubt them again!

Season 1 - Power beyond imagination..
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Issue 1- Shocking Beggining http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7512/pokemonvelocity010fk.png
Issue 2- Secret Power http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/7338/pokemonvelocity023bz.png

Character Bios
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Sprite:http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/6637/lukev21li.png
Name: Luke
Pokemon: Pidgey
Age: 15
Description: His parents died when he was 10 from a mysterious accident. He now lives with his grandpa. He got the power of poke-morphing after being hit by the meteor.

Credits
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None ATM

Enjoy folks more to come!

Matt Silver June 11th, 2006 10:21 PM

Hey this is alright. The sprites look familiar and are pretty good.
The plot seems good so far, but i want to see more. Keep it up.

Solemnity June 11th, 2006 10:32 PM

Which sprites look familiar?

Smarties-chan June 11th, 2006 11:08 PM

It's way too early to rate this, but at least it doesn't seem to be one of those cliché ''[Insert name here] wants to become a champion and sets of on a gym challenge'' thingies.

The Chrono trigger (or at least I think the blue portal-ish thingy is from there) sprite doesn't look good with the Pokémon background, though.

I also noticed a couple of typos, but the comic is well organized and the text is very easy on the eyes.

Keep it up. From what I have seen, this comic might have potential.

Solemnity June 11th, 2006 11:59 PM

Ok guys expect Issue 2- Secret Power soon.

Houndoom1 June 12th, 2006 4:59 AM

Nice comic. I like how you put that last effect on the last panel. Atleast we're getting less generic comics now! Can't wait to see issue two.

Chizzy June 12th, 2006 9:29 AM

Well done solemnity. Did you get what i sent you through PM?

Its good to see less Generic Comics now and I think this will be good.

Solemnity June 12th, 2006 1:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maneachicken
Well done solemnity. Did you get what i sent you through PM?

Its good to see less Generic Comics now and I think this will be good.

No I didnt get a Pm from you. Try sending again.
Oh and issue 2 should be up this afternoon.

Solemnity June 12th, 2006 11:40 PM

Sorry for double post but Issue 2 up.

Matt Silver June 13th, 2006 2:12 AM

The story seems to be developing good. Well done. I did notice some spelling errors:
when Gramps says: "YOUR A POKEMON!!!!!!111' get rid of the 1s.
Pidgee is spelt Pidgey.
and its You'd not youd.
Keep it up

Chizzy June 13th, 2006 10:56 PM

The Supers...Hmmm...Oh yeah...My carchter if he is in any form Good...make him like the mercution guy in Romeo and Juliet. Not a Super and not Evil, but friends with Lukes side.

Solemnity June 14th, 2006 12:54 AM

I fail to understand what you mean chicken.

Domin-8 June 14th, 2006 12:14 PM

You mean Mercutio, cusion of the mayor or what ever. He favors no side but hangs around the good people

Sweet Smoochum June 14th, 2006 12:16 PM

I like your comic, especially when the blonde boy turned into a Squirtle. I hope you don't give up on this. Keep posting.. xD By for now. (I think he means Mercutio, not mercution. Wasn't he Romeo's friend in the play?)

Chizzy June 14th, 2006 12:24 PM

Yeah...sorry...that was a Typo. Ive explained it via PM to Her and she understands. Can't wait to see the next episode!

Solemnity June 14th, 2006 1:30 PM

New issue will be up this afternoon. Got school now.

Tedd June 14th, 2006 3:25 PM

This comic is getting interesting.

Solemnity June 14th, 2006 10:43 PM

Ok guys I have work now so a new issue will be up after that.
Issue 3- The size-shifter

Zacceh June 15th, 2006 12:28 AM

Meh, this is pretty kool. I want to see more definatly.

Solemnity June 16th, 2006 3:51 PM

New Issue will be up in 1hr.

master jared! June 16th, 2006 6:33 PM

pretty good... i wouldent put badwords thouh but atleast thers only 1 but other than that its good and i guess your new to making sprite comics so its better

Solemnity June 16th, 2006 9:50 PM

Guys im sorry but ive been busy again and couldnt make the comic its half done and will be up tommorrow. For the mean time heres Lukes bios.

Chizzy June 16th, 2006 10:10 PM

Thats OK Soleminty...Don't pressure yourself Girl.


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