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Kuri-Chan ♪ June 12th, 2006 3:46 AM

The Crystal Legacy
 
Ok. So, this is my first sprite comic, please dont be too hard on me.
Comments are wanted, and are better than cookies. (I like cookies *shifts eyes*)

Story:
Crystal is a Young girl from Kanto, and sets out on a journey after being given a Pokemon with a strange marking on its forehead. The unnamed Professor gave her and Teo, her childhood rival, a Flareon for Crystal and a Jolteon for Teo. Crystal met Li, a strange boy about her age, when his Mew was stolen. Little do they know, destiny has more than what they bargined for in store for them...
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INTRO:
Intro Part 1
Intro Part 2

Chapter 1: Mew
Episode One- The Boy and His Mew
Episode Two- Rescue Mew!
Episode Three-The Crystal Pokemon
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Cast:

-Sprite not ready-
Name: Crystal
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Pokemon: Flareon
Text: Silver-Greyish
Info: Crystal is an 11 year old girl from Pallet. She is the main charactor. She is kind and loving, but not very brave any worrys alot.

-Sprite not Ready-
Name: Teo
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Pokemon: Jolteon
Text: Dark Purple-ish
Info: Teo is Crystals Childhood rival, after he pushed her into the lake when she was 5. They've been compeating ever scince.

-Sprite not ready-
Name: Li
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Pokemon: Mew
Text: Gold-ish
Info: Li meets Crystal after his mew is Stolen. He is a strange boy but He knows that Crystal is more than what she seems...

HikozaruLover June 12th, 2006 5:32 AM

It's a good start.I like how you made Li have Mew

Solemnity June 12th, 2006 1:29 PM

Its good for a generic comic its nicely set out but it still is a generic comic.

Kuri-Chan ♪ June 12th, 2006 2:29 PM

Generic? Well, Crystal's not collecting badges.
In season 3 there *should* be a magor plaot twist I'm thinking up.

Jake June 13th, 2006 5:17 AM

all i have to say is, theres many comics with mew in it

Tedd June 14th, 2006 3:38 PM

This is a good comic so far. Continue please.

DININI June 15th, 2006 10:10 AM

Nice...Very nice for a first comic! 7/10 :D (cause i never give 10 :p )
Keep up the good work!

Dinini

Kuri-Chan ♪ June 16th, 2006 2:13 PM

I'm hopeing to get the next one up by Monday. I've been busy...

♥Naomi♥ June 21st, 2006 11:14 AM

awww....mew ish so kawaii!
keep up the good work! 8/10


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