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The Crystal Legacy
Ok. So, this is my first sprite comic, please dont be too hard on me.
Comments are wanted, and are better than cookies. (I like cookies *shifts eyes*) Story: Crystal is a Young girl from Kanto, and sets out on a journey after being given a Pokemon with a strange marking on its forehead. The unnamed Professor gave her and Teo, her childhood rival, a Flareon for Crystal and a Jolteon for Teo. Crystal met Li, a strange boy about her age, when his Mew was stolen. Little do they know, destiny has more than what they bargined for in store for them... ------------------------------------- INTRO: Intro Part 1 Intro Part 2 Chapter 1: Mew Episode One- The Boy and His Mew Episode Two- Rescue Mew! Episode Three-The Crystal Pokemon ----------------------------------------- Cast: -Sprite not ready- Name: Crystal Gender: Female Age: 11 Pokemon: Flareon Text: Silver-Greyish Info: Crystal is an 11 year old girl from Pallet. She is the main charactor. She is kind and loving, but not very brave any worrys alot. -Sprite not Ready- Name: Teo Gender: Male Age: 12 Pokemon: Jolteon Text: Dark Purple-ish Info: Teo is Crystals Childhood rival, after he pushed her into the lake when she was 5. They've been compeating ever scince. -Sprite not ready- Name: Li Gender: Male Age: 11 Pokemon: Mew Text: Gold-ish Info: Li meets Crystal after his mew is Stolen. He is a strange boy but He knows that Crystal is more than what she seems... |
It's a good start.I like how you made Li have Mew
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Its good for a generic comic its nicely set out but it still is a generic comic.
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Generic? Well, Crystal's not collecting badges.
In season 3 there *should* be a magor plaot twist I'm thinking up. |
all i have to say is, theres many comics with mew in it
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This is a good comic so far. Continue please.
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Nice...Very nice for a first comic! 7/10 :D (cause i never give 10 :p )
Keep up the good work! Dinini |
I'm hopeing to get the next one up by Monday. I've been busy...
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awww....mew ish so kawaii!
keep up the good work! 8/10 |
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