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StarryLatiasGirl June 15th, 2006 2:11 PM

Adventures of a Poochyena
 
Well, this is my first attempt at a comic, so go easy on me! ^_~

This comic takes place in the Hoenn Region, several years after the Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald age took place. Team Rocket has joined up with Team Magma and Aqua, setting out to create powerful 'fusion Pokemon'. Their main plan is to capture and harness the energy of one of the most powerful Pokemon to walk the earth, whose name will be revealed later. A strange Poochyena, with certain mysterious powers, teams up with other Pokemon to try and stop the teams' evil plot (and possibly more plots...). So, read on to find out more!

Prologue- A New Beginning

Part One: The Forest
Chapter One: Thrush
Chapter Two: Smoke

Character Bios (will be updated as the comic progresses):

Thrush, the Poochyena/Pidgey hybrid
Name: Thrush
Age/Level: Lv.15
Personality: Quiet, nice, powerful, huge ego
Other: Thrush is genetically enhanced with Pidgey DNA, along with another mysterious Pokemon's DNA... he loves Pecha berries.

Well, I hope it's good... more will be posted later!

Note: I will mostly update on weekends, on weekdays if possible. On vacations (such as summer vacation) I can update any time I'm on.

~ML

StarryLatiasGirl June 15th, 2006 3:17 PM

Sorry for the DP... but chapter one is up!
Chapter One: Thrush

~ML

Barboach June 15th, 2006 3:23 PM

Really nice! I understand clearly whats going on here. No words spelled wrong, and the sprites are a work of art. Hope to see more!

StarryLatiasGirl June 15th, 2006 3:26 PM

Aw, thanks Barboach! *hugs* I'll probably update this comic MOSTLY on weekends, and they don't take very long to make, so... I'll work on Chappy 2 right now! *works*

~ML

Barboach June 15th, 2006 3:28 PM

Some people are born with the talent to create new and interesting comics, which is what you have. But their is a question that has been bugging me. Is this your first comic?

StarryLatiasGirl June 15th, 2006 3:30 PM

Yeah, I've never really gotten into making comics until now, so it may be a bit sketchy and stuff at first... anyways, here's some sprites of Thrush!
Clicky here!

~ML

Barboach June 15th, 2006 3:32 PM

I love the way you used the normal poochyena as a base, and slightly changed the eyes and the positions from scratch.

StarryLatiasGirl June 15th, 2006 3:35 PM

Actually, to make Thrush, I took the normal emerald Poochyena, copied over the outline, and did the shading, expressions, other poses, etc. from scratch. Except the wings and colors, of course. But thanks! I hope that more people like this comic, seeing as it's my first... And I accept all crits, because critisizm helps me get better! And if anyone has ideas for this comic, feel free to PM me!

~ML

Chizzy June 15th, 2006 10:37 PM

Very, Very Crisp! I like what Im seeing. Many Different Poses for each charchter, its not Generic and looks Interesting. No Spelling Mistakes also.

Too early to rate, but Im finding this Good so far.

Solemnity June 15th, 2006 11:42 PM

This comic could have a lot of potential but to me the story is just unoriginal, boring and needs much work. Comics with pokemon that talk dont usually work out. (TRUST ME)

Sanctuary June 16th, 2006 5:23 AM

Well its obvious that I would have found this thread sometimes isn't it?
Oh the pictures are so adorable!
There are good pictures, along with the good spelling it can make a great comic...
I hope that you will make some more comics up and I hope the story line can keep moving on...
Best of luck!

~Mighty_Mightyena99 :t262:

Frostfur June 16th, 2006 6:12 AM

i dunno why but for some reas'n, i think the Beedril/Charizard is cute!! i really just love it. well no spelling errors or nothin. keep it up.

StarryLatiasGirl June 16th, 2006 9:57 AM

Thanks! Chapter 2 is up!
Chapter Two: Smoke

Enjoy!

~ML

~\"Metal Sonic"/~ June 16th, 2006 10:00 AM

This... is... great!

No spelling erors

No wrong Grammer

And puchyena cut is!

(He he. I violated so many spelling/grammar rules...)

Oh well.

Anyway, your story says thet Thrush teams up with other mutant pokemon. Will you take suggestions for characters? 'Cause it would be cool if Thrush's teamate was a male Golduck/Marowack/Smeargle...

StarryLatiasGirl June 16th, 2006 10:51 AM

Well, I have plans for a Zigzagoon/Rhyhorn... but suggestions are welcome! ^_^

The next comic will be here by tomorrow night.

~ML

Chizzy June 16th, 2006 12:50 PM

Oh No! It sounds like the ledgendary Bambi All over again!

Goatman56 June 16th, 2006 3:48 PM

I've seen something like this before on Serebii. Except it was a Vulpix and the cave was on fire. It's true that it's well put together but, I have seen something like it before.

Solemnity June 16th, 2006 3:51 PM

As I said its too unoriginal.

♥Naomi♥ June 16th, 2006 6:52 PM

ooo!!!kawaii!

i gots an idea!
*whisper*
flygon/eevee!

~\"Metal Sonic"/~ June 17th, 2006 4:45 AM

*Bashes Solemnity over the head*
Dude, stop saying that every comic is a snorefest or is "Unoriginal."


Anyway, ooohhhh! Zigzorn! Or Rhyhagoon! Yay!


So far, I LURVE the comic! Keep on going! You have greatness within you[/Jedi Talk]

Desgardes June 17th, 2006 7:02 AM

Im afraid im going to have to somewhat agree with Solemnity.

I like it the style of the comic, but the whole, "OMG MY PARENTS IM GUNAN GET REVENGE!!!111" is a bit unoriginal.
While its still early, i hope you take a good direction with this comic.

Solemnity June 17th, 2006 5:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~\"Metal Sonic"/~
*Bashes Solemnity over the head*
Dude, stop saying that every comic is a snorefest or is "Unoriginal."


Anyway, ooohhhh! Zigzorn! Or Rhyhagoon! Yay!


So far, I LURVE the comic! Keep on going! You have greatness within you[/Jedi Talk]

I dont say every comic is a snorefest. This is just simply a get revenge/quest story. I know it hasnt particularly gone into a whole get revenge/quest yet but it is obviously coming. Ive seen several comics like this. Quite frankly they sicken me.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Desgardes
Im afraid im going to have to somewhat agree with Solemnity.

I like it the style of the comic, but the whole, "OMG MY PARENTS IM GUNAN GET REVENGE!!!111" is a bit unoriginal.
While its still early, i hope you take a good direction with this comic.

I also would hope you take it in a good direction.

Salamence God June 26th, 2006 11:34 PM

Don't listen to Solemnity, MisticaLugia. She's just a idiot who has no taste for sprite comics. I also have a fusion idea. Salamence/Dragonite! Salanite or Dragomence!

SuperGuy June 26th, 2006 11:37 PM

i read it before this, im not sure if i posted, too lazy to check, u havent put out any new comics!!! tisk tisk tisk but it is a good comic though ...Z...Z...z...z

Sweet Smoochum June 28th, 2006 1:24 PM

*2 thumbs up*
 
I bow down to your skills of great comic/sprite making and the fact that you don't have any spelling/grammer errors. Don't listen to Solemnity, your comic isn't unoriginal. I'm not exactly a big fan of fusions but yours are amazing! The poochyena/pidgey you made was very well made and really adorable. I'll be looking forward to reading more chapters. By for now. XD

Spoiler:
THIS IS MY *100th* POST! Horraaay!!!!


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