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Chizzy June 24th, 2006 7:32 AM

Poke-Mon
 
WARNING: This is PG13 as there is swearing in this comic and various other pathetic things.


IF YOU READ THIS COMIC PLEASE POST.... THATS THE WAY TO GET MORE COMICS!


Hi Guys... This is my new sprite Comic! *Bows*. I've had my time out of the section and due to all the recent spurlge of Generics, I went for more of a different approach with this sort of already half way through story.

We start with our Hero Daniel Roberts, Who is a trainer who wanders around the region of Kanto with his Voltorb, Orby. Daniel and His Voltorb have a kind of Generic Adventure on thier hands, and they are returning home after Accidently Burning Down Viridian Forrest.

All Pokemon (excluding Rockets Meowth) Think everything. I have used italics to show thought.

The Comic
1. Doubting
2. Internet
3. Walk
4. Distraction
5. Kentucky
6. My House
7. Love
8. Run
9. Short
10. Cliche'd NEWEST!


Charachters

Daniel Roberts : He is a 15 year old boy who travels around with his Voltorb. He pokes fun at his spherical friend.
Orby : Orby is a Voltorb who wants to be in control. He has a temper and is Poked fun at continuosly.
Slowpoke: A Fat Pink Peice of Lard. He hates Orby and wishes he could eat him. Typical.
James Rocket : He is a gentleman who is commonly seen trying to steal pokemon for his boss Giovanni. Recently, him and meowth have developed a taste for Slowpoke.
Meowth Rocket : James's Sidekick. He can talk and understands Pokemon speech. Is lazy and sometimes annoying. Recently, Him and James Have developed a Taste for Slowpoke.
Angry Mob: The Angry Mob is made up of Bug Catchers and Young Trainers. The Mob is led by Phat Gui, the local Mayor.
Falkner: The Ex Gym Leader of Violet City in Johto. He got exported after selling bird Pokemon to KFC.
Fat: This Guy fills Comics up with his Overall Pointlessness.
3 Homeless Kids: They sure do Love their Pokemon... coughbbqcough!!!

Credit
Pokemon Elite 2000
Serebii Forums Attackdex
Chronis
Myself
You Guys who Post about this Comic
Spriters Resource
Online Video Game Atlas
Coronis
GameGuy29
Epona4

(If I forgot you, just let me know...)

HikozaruLover June 24th, 2006 8:33 AM

Heh,that was funny,I'll keep my eye on this...

Chizzy June 24th, 2006 8:57 AM

Meh... Myself I think it would've of been better if Orby would've said 'Never Doubt Me' and thanks BosnslyLover for your comment. Next Episode is being worked on too, and if you want more epiosdes, you have to post guys!

Sweet Smoochum June 24th, 2006 9:06 AM

Your comic made me laugh because of what voltorb did... I like how the hero has a voltorb instead of one of the starters and the fact that you customized your hero sprite. Daniel's eyes looked funny in the 5th panel.(that's my younger brother's name, too) This comic is heading in a good direction. Keep up the super good work. I'll be back...

Chizzy June 24th, 2006 9:13 AM

Gym Leader Lily... I bow down to you... I don't know anyone who has ever given me a three line long response! Thanks. The eyes were a Random thing and the Vltorb Just came to my head becasue I like them!

Next Episode will see the Introduction of James from Team Rocket and Meowth.

Ark Kuvis June 24th, 2006 10:19 AM

The comic was presented greatly.

The joke wasn't.

If you want to make a humorous comic, you need to have a humorous joke. That right there, wasn't even a chuckle.

Chizzy June 24th, 2006 10:21 AM

Im going to change the last panel ever so slightly, becasue i know (and said earlier...) the joke never came out the way I wanted it to.

Edit: Here is the next episode... 2. Internet

Solemnity June 24th, 2006 5:27 PM

hey this is pretty funny Ill definetly keep me eye on this one.

Chizzy June 24th, 2006 11:20 PM

Thanks Solemnity... Im also looking for a Banner so I can advertise this in my signature. Next episode is up later...

Trequilla June 24th, 2006 11:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Daviku
The comic was presented greatly.

The joke wasn't.

If you want to make a humorous comic, you need to have a humorous joke. That right there, wasn't even a chuckle.


I thought it was good... Just because of a: the randomness of the first 1... but the second one wasn't quite so lolish...

Chizzy June 24th, 2006 11:42 PM

I actually Prefer the second Comic Myself. To me it seems better.

and I have already scripted the next episode and im just doing it right now, so expect it in half an hour...

EDIT: Here is the new episode... entitled 'Walk'

Solemnity June 25th, 2006 2:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maneachicken
Thanks Solemnity... Im also looking for a Banner so I can advertise this in my signature. Next episode is up later...

I can make you a userbar just give me the image you want.

Chizzy June 25th, 2006 2:29 AM

1 Attachment(s)
Can you use the trainer on here and a Voltorb?

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HikozaruLover June 25th, 2006 4:12 AM

That episode was funny,yet again.

Chizzy June 25th, 2006 4:33 AM

Thanks BonslyLover... Glad you liked it... That Walk Idea just came to me this morning...

EDIT: New Episode

4. Distraction

Shijuukara June 25th, 2006 11:51 AM

This is a very interestng comic , funny but too explicit. I suggest asking for a name change of the thread and say that it is PG:13

Chizzy June 25th, 2006 12:20 PM

It does say in a massive text on the first post that its a PG 13.

But I think I may be over swearing so I'll cut that out a bit. expect two episodes within the next half an hour.

EDIT: Check the first POst for episodes 5 & 6.

obelisk-kun June 25th, 2006 1:11 PM

This is good I like chapter 5 the best.

Chizzy June 25th, 2006 1:13 PM

Thanks dude. Episode 5 was just completely random and i needed an answer to why Falkner was in Kanto. Long live KFP! Keep posting people!

Persona June 25th, 2006 1:32 PM

Finaly, someone who knows how to start out good with a comic. I like how all your episodes seem organized, understandable and not too cliché. It's not something that drags on, and gets boring. It's humerous. I like it so far, keep it up Chiz.

Solemnity June 25th, 2006 1:56 PM

Cool man nice new eps cant wait for hoenn!!

Sweet Smoochum June 25th, 2006 4:10 PM

I just saw the new eppys. You update fast! I like how you encorporated my favorite fast food place into your comic! I work there! :D Nice job with your comic. Keep at it! I'll be back to see more eppys...ByForNow. :D

♥Naomi♥ June 25th, 2006 4:25 PM

the house thing seems familar....i think i saw something similar at the pokemon pebble place..

SuperGuy June 25th, 2006 8:24 PM

LOL. OMG. So funny. hahaha you got to make more comics like this one. ROFL! Man... Z...Z...z...z

Chizzy June 25th, 2006 10:19 PM

Thanks everybody! I've scripted the next few episodes so expect one tonight.

Thanks Ryan. Thats the sort of comment i was waiting for!

GLL... KFP? You work there??? Its not real... get over it! lol...

Solemnity...You'll have to wait for the next Chapter then!


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