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Cursed March 20th, 2007 4:29 PM

Cursed Presents: Mario and Luigi: The Thousand-Year Stone
 
After being inspired by the expertise of Mario and Luigi: ShadowStar Saga, I created my amazing ideas for my own Mlss Comic. Enjoy!
[Prologue: Return of the Shadows]
[Pt. I]
[Pt. II]
Chapter I: Rebuilding the Castle
[Pt. I]

Credit to Nintendo for creating the characters, Joshr for his custom Pokemon sprites, which helped me greatly in Chapter 1-1, The Spriters Resource for having the needed sprites.

doesn't matter March 22nd, 2007 1:32 AM

hmm, it's a poor effort in my opinion. It should at least explain a bit more of the story. Moreover, the panels are going from right to left right? I was confused at first XD;

Anywho, you should organise your panels better as well. Organising 5 panels the way you did only creates wasted space which could easily allow for another panel.

Cursed March 22nd, 2007 9:12 AM

Thank you for your opinion, but I was trying to make the beginning vague. As for the poor layout and lack of background in the 1-panel flashback, I am currently trying to adapt to photoshop, and my internet access was fried when I made the flashback. No offense, but how would you make a 5-panel layout? I am merely asking for future reference.

Cursed March 28th, 2007 1:14 PM

Finally! Outta the Prologue, onto the interesting stuff!
[Episode I]


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