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Platinum Lucario July 19th, 2008 9:52 PM

OK, this is my first map on this thread, and this is what you'll see. Please rate this map and tell me what should be improved.
I didn't make it any square like or anything. Well here it is:

Nice map isn't it?

Tyrantrum July 19th, 2008 10:00 PM

I like the shape of the map, but the r some empty spaces and too many ledges...8.5/10

Thrace July 19th, 2008 11:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silver Riolu (Post 3774847)
OK, this is my first map on this thread, and this is what you'll see. Please rate this map and tell me what should be improved.
I didn't make it any square like or anything. Well here it is:

Nice map isn't it?

Rating: 1.5/10
Comments: You guys worry way too much about your map looking square. Take a look at the maps that are already in FR (the Sevii Island ones). Why is there so much randomly placed grass everywhere? It looks terrible, so do the placement of stones and flowers. Same with the trees. Just bad, sorry. I do like how you've tried to incorporate the ledges. But you used way too many and it just looks bad.

Neti July 20th, 2008 12:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silver Riolu (Post 3774847)
OK, this is my first map on this thread, and this is what you'll see. Please rate this map and tell me what should be improved.
I didn't make it any square like or anything. Well here it is:

Nice map isn't it?

Nice shape and good placing of stuff like rocks, flowers and grass
at the left part there are too many ledges, that should be changed
and the small trees there are standing in rows, which is not good
the right part is cool to me
rating: 7/10

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eeveon (Post 3774866)
I like the shape of the map, but the r some empty spaces and too many ledges...8.5/10

where do you see empty space? Oo

Quote:

Originally Posted by dshayabusa (Post 3775001)
Rating: 1.5/10
Comments: You guys worry way too much about your map looking square. Take a look at the maps that are already in FR (the Sevii Island ones). Why is there so much randomly placed grass everywhere? It looks terrible, so do the placement of stones and flowers. Same with the trees. Just bad, sorry. I do like how you've tried to incorporate the ledges. But you used way too many and it just looks bad.

just cause the original FR maps are square doesnt mean we have to do the same mistake ;-)
everybody can work things out on their maps that they think are important. in my opinion the shape is like the most important feature of a map, so it shouldnt be boring

Tyrantrum July 20th, 2008 12:03 AM

Well, not empty "space", just empty spots. ^_^"

Neti July 20th, 2008 12:05 AM

i dont think so, i think he didnt overdo it or put too less stuff on the map. the placing is nice
but thats a matter of taste

Tyrantrum July 20th, 2008 12:07 AM

Well, I guess I'm seeing it in a weird way! :P
Overall, the map is good. :)

Ninja Caterpie July 20th, 2008 12:08 AM

dshayabusa was talking about how good the shape of the Sevii Islands were, not how bad!

Tyrantrum July 20th, 2008 12:42 AM

Here's a map by me! :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/abcd.jpg

Chimchar 9 July 20th, 2008 4:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eeveon (Post 3775161)

its really good not to square nice tiles good and small as what your good at but too many flower's for me accept that i like it i give you 9/10 well done

Neti July 20th, 2008 4:16 AM

thats a beautiful palette you made there Eeveon

Chimchar 9 July 20th, 2008 5:26 AM

i just made a map without trying but you might like it so here it is

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/canyon.jpg?t=1216560298

please vote

Tyrantrum July 20th, 2008 9:16 AM

@Neti: That's a Rom Base by Christos! XD

@riolu9: It's very good, and the mountains keep it from being too empty.
Of course, about the ledges:
1. U can jump onto the rock! O.o
2. The tiny ledges should look like that. :\
...9/10

Austinia July 20th, 2008 3:56 PM

Here, check out this forest I made :D

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4338/forestmaphg2.jpg

Its for a event to catch celebi :) please tell me what you think!

.:God:. July 20th, 2008 4:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Austinia (Post 3777251)
Here, check out this forest I made :D

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4338/forestmaphg2.jpg

Its for a event to catch celebi :) please tell me what you think!

This is for Oak's Murder? I'm a fan of it... that's one thing. And 2. the rating:

I'll give it a... 7.5/10

Why?
Props:
Nice and long, keeps the player going
Grass is placed well

Slops:
Kinda too long... it would get boring
And since I can't see the tile errors, there are probably a ton. Now... for my map:

It's the first map for Pokemon Revelation. Here it is: Techlabo Town!
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5637/gamegameboogeynq1.th.png

Ninja Caterpie July 20th, 2008 5:08 PM

The house's shape is funny...
But...oh well.
Let's see...
The flowers at the bottom are disturbing...Too many of them.
The paths are dodgy...
And the house has tile errors galore.
Also, it's very unrealistic. Who would want ONE LITTLE bit of room to walk in?
5/10

Now for my own map

Austinia July 20th, 2008 7:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rescue Team Wave (Post 3777409)
This is for Oak's Murder? I'm a fan of it... that's one thing. And 2. the rating:

I'll give it a... 7.5/10

Why?
Props:
Nice and long, keeps the player going
Grass is placed well

Slops:
Kinda too long... it would get boring
And since I can't see the tile errors, there are probably a ton. Now... for my map:

It's the first map for Pokemon Revelation. Here it is: Techlabo Town!
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5637/gamegameboogeynq1.th.png

There are not many tile errors, I don't think anyways. And I noticed its kinda long :s but its to get celebi! So, I guess the player will have to endure it :p You also go back in time--- erm.... yea.... ;)

Your map- 7/10 tiles placed kinda weird and hard to navigate through the town, but overall its pretty nice.

Tyrantrum July 20th, 2008 8:26 PM

http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/somemap.jpg

FinalEclipse July 20th, 2008 8:56 PM

Here is another map of mine.

Map Name: A random town.

Map Game: Firered using the Super DP rombase (credit to X buster for it)

Comments: This is just for the ratings.

Mapshot: http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=995&pictureid=6545

Austinia July 21st, 2008 10:30 AM

Anyone care to rate Apricoa city? :D

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/oldtown.png

back in time town.

Neti July 21st, 2008 11:34 AM

you made that map in advance map in a 3rd gen game right?

Melash July 21st, 2008 2:45 PM

Map Name: ????
Map Game: Fire Red
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/TheRiver.jpg
Comments: Okay, I realize that there's some tile errors by the fence on the left and the trees on the top. Ignore them! Anyway, this is just a river that probably connects a town/city to a Route. I was just bored, so I made it!

Tyrantrum July 21st, 2008 2:57 PM

1 Attachment(s)
I found the tile errors...8.5/10

[K]evin "The Last Eeveon" July 21st, 2008 3:16 PM


Austinia July 21st, 2008 3:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neti (Post 3780328)
you made that map in advance map in a 3rd gen game right?

Yepp, pokemon Firered :) put in the tiles and used them. lol.

Tyrantrum July 21st, 2008 3:35 PM

1 Attachment(s)
@Kevin33193:
Hmm....
9/10 for effort.
6.5/10 for errors.

Austinia July 21st, 2008 11:51 PM

I finally inserted desert tiles, and most of them are complete. Heres a map I made with them:

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-2.jpg

Please rate this map for me? :D

Osher99 July 21st, 2008 11:54 PM

Map Name: Bloom Town

Map Game: FireRed | Veridian City

Comments: Just Rate it Quickly, My VERY First map hack.
I'm new in hack rom

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1212/veridiancityok1.jpg

Tyrantrum July 22nd, 2008 12:00 AM

@Austinia: It seems very nice, and I'm not gonna say it's too square because it's a desert! :P
The little water supply like the ponds and lake is very good...9.5/10

@Osher99: I'm not gonna rate ur map for obvious reasons...:\

Austinia July 22nd, 2008 12:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eeveon (Post 3782268)
@Austinia: It seems very nice, and I'm not gonna say it's too square because it's a desert! :P
The little water supply like the ponds and lake is very good...9.5/10

@Osher99: I'm not gonna rate ur map for obvious reasons...:\

lol. You can't demand much in a desert =D If its got water, you gotta live with the square-ness :o

Tyrantrum July 22nd, 2008 12:20 AM

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Too many errors, too empty, too square, and too obvious what place u edited.
This obviously deserves a...0/10
Sry for the harsh rating...:\

Neti July 22nd, 2008 1:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Austinia (Post 3781259)
Yepp, pokemon Firered :) put in the tiles and used them. lol.

i did the same thing and rebuilt whole azelea town, tin tower, ecruteak city and olivine city^^
if you put my map next to a mapshot of the gold map you cant tell which is the original one

Ninja Caterpie July 22nd, 2008 2:16 AM

Not unless you know the GSC palletes because I've seen your's and the pallete is just a tiny bit different.

Anyway, Austinia, loving it. I like the water, shallow ponds, shape (don't care if it's square) and the cacti placement. Lovely. 8/10

.Iramet July 22nd, 2008 11:58 AM

1 Attachment(s)
Fosleaf town.jpg
fosleaf
ruby
i like

BlackRainbow* July 22nd, 2008 12:24 PM

First of all you can't use those tiles because they were made by Lex. But i i rate your map. Well its really squarish. the water don't look good.
4.5/10

Neti July 22nd, 2008 12:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Austinia (Post 3782259)
I finally inserted desert tiles, and most of them are complete. Heres a map I made with them:

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-2.jpg

Please rate this map for me? :D

is this for ruby or FR?
did u take the tiles out of the rombase on your own or did i send mine to you and you just edited the tileset a bit?
im just wondering

Austinia July 22nd, 2008 2:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neti (Post 3783956)
is this for ruby or FR?
did u take the tiles out of the rombase on your own or did i send mine to you and you just edited the tileset a bit?
im just wondering

I inserted them myself :p And they are in FireRed.

EDIT: I think its against the rules to double post so I'll add my newest map to this post!

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/mytown.png

Could someone rate it please? :D

Neti July 23rd, 2008 2:50 AM

those desert maps look truely awesome, the ygive me a good preview of how my desert region will turn out since im using the same tiles^^

i did so many ice maps, theyre so normal to me now that i like desert once much more xD
i think ill continue mapping LoF now

edit: what do you think of my latest map:
Map Name: Shaqiu
Hack: Legend of Fenju
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu.png
Comments: First Village of Huoshi

and pls tell me, whicch palette would you prefer, the first one or this one:

i think the sand iss better in the first one and the roofs, plants and mountains look better in the second one, so ill probably mix em up

EarthsVisitor July 23rd, 2008 9:07 AM

Okay, back to rating maps. Like db, I am very critical and harsh with my ratings. Maybe not AS harsh, but still harsh. Here we go!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Austinia (Post 3782259)
I finally inserted desert tiles, and most of them are complete. Heres a map I made with them:

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-2.jpg

Please rate this map for me? :D

There is ONE thing I like, sort of. And that is the placement of the houses. The tiles are gorgeous. But. The map saddens me. The river on top looks so awkward along with the fence around the whole town, that just looks bad. And in terms of pokemon gameplay, there so many places for him to exit the town. I don't like the area behind the mart.
3.5/10

Quote:

Originally Posted by Osher99 (Post 3782264)
Map Name: Bloom Town

Map Game: FireRed | Veridian City

Comments: Just Rate it Quickly, My VERY First map hack.
I'm new in hack rom

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1212/veridiancityok1.jpg

Too many flowers together. Lots of emptiness. Many tile errors. Weird placement and bad overall structure.
1/10

Quote:

Originally Posted by emoakt (Post 3783846)
Fosleaf town.jpg
fosleaf
ruby
i like

Boxy, random placement of houses. Random lake which feels disconnected with the rest of the map. Palette is weird and disalarming.
1/10


Quote:

Originally Posted by Austinia (Post 3784489)
I inserted them myself :p And they are in FireRed.

EDIT: I think its against the rules to double post so I'll add my newest map to this post!

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/mytown.png

Could someone rate it please? :D

Now, this is MUCH, MUCH better. I LOVE the concept of this map, with the river flowing inbetween and coming off the mountain into the desert. I love that idea! And I think you pulled it off pretty nicely. I enjoy the bottom area. There is just enough trees and rocks. There are only 2 things I would address. The house tiles, don't seem to fit well in the rocky area. And the right area of the mountain, it feels disconnected and out of place. Make the are more shapely.
8/10

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neti (Post 3785897)
those desert maps look truely awesome, the ygive me a good preview of how my desert region will turn out since im using the same tiles^^

i did so many ice maps, theyre so normal to me now that i like desert once much more xD
i think ill continue mapping LoF now

edit: what do you think of my latest map:
Map Name: Shaqiu
Hack: Legend of Fenju
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu.png
Comments: First Village of Huoshi

and pls tell me, whicch palette would you prefer, the first one or this one:

i think the sand iss better in the first one and the roofs, plants and mountains look better in the second one, so ill probably mix em up

Alright, the map itself first. Nice tiles. My issues with this map are:
It feels crowded.
The house on the left feels too close to the exit.
The gray rocks do not fit in the desert.
Everything else seems alright. It's a nice little town. I think the placement of the houses could be improved though. Make the map a little bigger.
6/10

As for which palette, I leave you instead with a question.
Do you want a more evil looking town, or a happier, more pleasant town?
Cause the first palette gives the town this dark and mysterious look such as in the old western movies.
The second palette gives it a more welcoming and inviting town look.
:]

Neti July 23rd, 2008 9:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by EarthsVisitor (Post 3786836)
Alright, the map itself first. Nice tiles. My issues with this map are:
It feels crowded.
The house on the left feels too close to the exit.
The gray rocks do not fit in the desert.
Everything else seems alright. It's a nice little town. I think the placement of the houses could be improved though. Make the map a little bigger.
6/10

As for which palette, I leave you instead with a question.
Do you want a more evil looking town, or a happier, more pleasant town?
Cause the first palette gives the town this dark and mysterious look such as in the old western movies.
The second palette gives it a more welcoming and inviting town look.
:]

I noticed those 3 things too already
but i dont think theyre too bad, so i jsut posted the map to look what other ppl think about them. i think ill change tose things

about the palettes: ive decided to take the second one, but with another palette. the sand is darker as in the first image, but still more yellow, not so orange

0m3GA ARS3NAL July 23rd, 2008 9:45 AM

Ok, two new maps here, what do you people think?


And Map #2


Ratings and opinions please?
(are the images showing up? My comp sometimes wont show them to me, but can you see them, if not, please tell me)

Austinia July 23rd, 2008 9:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neti (Post 3785897)
those desert maps look truely awesome, the ygive me a good preview of how my desert region will turn out since im using the same tiles^^

i did so many ice maps, theyre so normal to me now that i like desert once much more xD
i think ill continue mapping LoF now

edit: what do you think of my latest map:
Map Name: Shaqiu
Hack: Legend of Fenju
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu.png
Comments: First Village of Huoshi

and pls tell me, whicch palette would you prefer, the first one or this one:

i think the sand iss better in the first one and the roofs, plants and mountains look better in the second one, so ill probably mix em up

I like the first palette better.


Quote:

Originally Posted by 0m3GA AR$3NAL (Post 3786985)
Ok, two new maps here, what do you people think?


And Map #2


Ratings and opinions please?

I'm not sure why, but no images are showing up for me.

Neti July 23rd, 2008 10:06 AM

i dont see the images either

0m3GA ARS3NAL July 23rd, 2008 10:22 AM






Try these (I wasn't using Imageshack before, Try it now in these spoilers ^)

.Iramet July 23rd, 2008 11:15 AM

yea i knew that map wasnt very good i was just trying to get a map on here becuz ive been trying for a while to do it^_^
@blackrainbow:Everyone uses others tiles its not wrong^_^
At least my map is original.LOL

BlackRainbow* July 23rd, 2008 11:25 AM

oh yeah it is. You have to get permission to use it.
Sorry for spamming

Luck July 23rd, 2008 11:59 AM

Or else it would be considered thievery.

here is a map i made, its supposed to be a semi-tropical route.

tell me if you don't see it.
and please use constructive criticism since this is the first completed map i've made in a while.
honestly, im a bit dissapointed in this map.

Edit: If anyone woders why the trees are like that, its because i just hate trees with patterns.
its not very natural to me.And also, i have changed the grass to be R/S/E like, leaving more space.

Neti July 23rd, 2008 12:02 PM

hey i love that map, it looks really nice!

Luck July 23rd, 2008 12:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neti (Post 3787446)
hey i love that map, it looks really nice!

erm, thanks but could you tell me what is wrong and give a honest rating?

Anyways, i found another map, but i made this map more mountainous since a crater apparently landed into the center(erosion took care of the crater).
i made this map to be more mountainous, but i put trees because i just hate treeless areas.

like before, please give a detailed description about what is wrong.
i really don't like this map much because it seems really crowded, but i do like the mountain tile placement.
And again, tell me if you don't see it.

Oh, and the barred door is just as useless as the white rock in mossdeep.
Just an easter egg.

Makorin July 23rd, 2008 6:56 PM

Hiya! i've got a map i've been working on here...
what do u people think 'bout it?

Map Name: Frotus Town
Hack: Legend of Hatichu
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://i34.*.com/ir2hkx.jpg

Tyrantrum July 23rd, 2008 6:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mew_Ryn (Post 3788681)
Hiya! i've got a map i've been working on here...
what do u people think 'bout it?

Map Name: Frotus Town
Hack: Legend of Hatichu
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://i34.*.com/ir2hkx.jpg

The shape looks good to me, but it's a tiny bit empty at the bottom, and that Rom Base is over used...8/10

tImE July 24th, 2008 12:56 AM

Hi, I've been
working on a Desert Town
for some time now and I thought I ought to post it
and see what people thinks of it.

Map Name: Subaku Town
Hack: Pokemon Nature Force (Not posted on PC yet)
Game: Firered BPRE Sorry xP Ruby AXVE
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5898/subakutowncn4.png

BlackRainbow* July 24th, 2008 1:00 AM

44tim44 i really like your map. it has a nice layout and really awesome tiles. maybe you should put some more trees in it?
8/10

.Iramet July 24th, 2008 5:25 AM

44tim44 that is a really good map i wish i could do somthing like that i would give it a 9/10 only because nothing is ever perfect
@blackrainbow-thnks for telling me and ill just use the ones atr whack a hack cuz they already give you permission as long as you give the creator credit for the tiles

Tyrantrum July 24th, 2008 4:29 PM

@44tim44: It's a good map, the tiles r excellent, just add a few more holes and rocks...8.5/10

Luck July 24th, 2008 4:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 44tim44 (Post 3789316)
Hi, I've been
working on a Desert Town
for some time now and I thought I ought to post it
and see what people thinks of it.

Map Name: Subaku Town
Hack: Pokemon Nature Force (Not posted on PC yet)
Game: Firered BPRE Sorry xP Ruby AXVE
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5898/subakutowncn4.png

Its okay but can be much better.
The town is too bunched up and gets too empty.
there are no rocks in the water, it seems really dull, the top of the mountain tiles seem weird,and the mountain placement just doesn't look that good.
there isn't much to expect from a desert town but it could still be better.
6.8/10 for emptiness.

Edit: I know no one ever reads the page before the last page, so i'll put my previous maps on here.



Mr.Fury July 24th, 2008 6:36 PM

i really like your map, nice simple with great tiles. 9/10 ^_^

*edit* didnt feel like double posting, so ill post my map here.

Name: Sequil Village (iunno were it came from, just liked it)
ROM: Fire Red
Original: Pallet Town

Please rate and comment 1-10
And keep in mind this is my first succesful map i have made, just for fun.

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/2892/sequilvillagexj9.th.png



Also i am possibly looking for a tutor/mentor for hacking. ^_^

Netdot5 July 24th, 2008 8:02 PM

On the map, the ends of the path are kinda not so good. Make sure you are using the right tiles that make it flow. You need to find the connecter for the vertical and horizontal paths. Right now, they are just clashing together.

Austinia July 24th, 2008 8:19 PM

I have to say I am pretty happy with this city I just made... it took forever making the palettes and inserting the tiles but here it is!


http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/SitruaCity.png

Sitrua City

from my Pokemon hack (Oak's Murder)

Tyrantrum July 24th, 2008 8:23 PM

I simply love the placement of everything, especially the trees! :D
Very good...9.5/10

Likewise July 24th, 2008 8:27 PM

okay this is the first map of my hack pokemon deep blue/transform

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7205/waterfalltownyj6.th.png
yes i know that there are some errors this is just a rough copy of it
please rate!

Lollypop July 25th, 2008 4:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by behbod55 (Post 3790546)
okay this is the first map of my hack pokemon deep blue/transform

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7205/waterfalltownyj6.th.png
yes i know that there are some errors this is just a rough copy of it
please rate!

With errors 4/10
Without caring about errors 8/10.

I like the shape of the map. The shape is pretty good too.

Ninja Caterpie July 25th, 2008 4:24 AM

Dude, don't post unfinished maps. Ya know, half of the points are for how the map actually is...
2/10 because you're lazy.

_____________________
Now, this is my map. It's a peninsula...
Oh, by the way, that grass has something special so...yeah.
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2352/peninsulavy8.png

.Iramet July 25th, 2008 5:44 AM

1 Attachment(s)
name: the final gym leaders house
game:ruby
comments:if i make a hack this will be in it
thanks to vincent for inserting the tiles ^_^

Mr.Fury July 25th, 2008 5:53 AM

Thank you for the help...I will try to find them.
I made another map, it took a while, i like the outcome, but seeing as this is my second map, im not an expert.
Please rate 1-10 and add constructive critiscm. ^_^

Name: Edmond's Crossing (*shrugs*)
ROM: FireRed
Orginal: The water below pallet town, forgot what the route is called.

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/7937/edmondscrossinggm7.th.png

.Iramet July 25th, 2008 7:39 AM

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sorry for posting it twice i didnt think the first one worked

Netdot5 July 25th, 2008 9:05 AM

Rating: 6/10
Reason: I like it, Mr.Fury. The way that everything flows on your map. I just don't like how the 2-story house looks. That may just be me, though. Everything else is good, though.
Suggestions: So, just find a way to fix that house. Oh, and when going on that ladder/stairway up the rock the one stairway that is more of at the top of the rock doesn't look so good.

Rating: 4/10
Reason: It just looks boring, emoakt. It's not good to leave empty grass in some places.
Suggestions: Maybe add some flowers or trees or something in some of those empty spaces.

Map Name: Rodiok Island
Game: Fire Red
Comments: This is my second try at making this map. This time I started from scratch, so I could get it too look like the sketch I made. The island revolves around that little PoKeFarm right there.

.Iramet July 25th, 2008 9:58 AM

thanks for the comments ill do that netdot5 and i think your map is 6.5/10
because there is a mis map with the fence in back of the two doored house?
and you could probably get rid of one of the docks.
^_^
also the ridges are kinda weird lookin lined up like that

Mr.Fury July 25th, 2008 10:10 AM

Thank you for the help!
I really didnt like the house either so im gonna fill that space with trees and stuff, but i will leave the pokecenter and mart...and im not sure what you are talking about with the mountain.
When i am finished i will post another pic, but with sprites ^_^

@ your map.
7/10 I really like the flow of it, but it seems to big and there is a lot of open space, so perhaps fill it with more stuff or just make it smaller, and maybe a little less square. other than that its really good.

.Iramet July 25th, 2008 10:30 AM

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I edited the colors and i added a few things please rate ^_^
i also changed the sprites a bit

Austinia July 25th, 2008 10:32 AM

I give it an 7.7/10 :) (emoakt)

Mr.Fury July 25th, 2008 11:41 AM

Hello again fellas!
I have edited my two maps to my liking, hope they are to yours as well.
1-10 please. :D

Name: Sequil Village
Rom: Fire Red
Original: Pallet Town
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9477/sequilvillagetx6.th.png

Name: Edmond's Crossing
Rom: Fire Red
Original: Ocean bellow Pallet Town
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8738/edmondscrossingkz9.th.png

Austinia July 25th, 2008 11:08 PM

http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/8320/route410ff1.png

Route 409 for my hack ^_~ tell me your opinions!

Tyrantrum July 25th, 2008 11:17 PM

I love the shape! :D
The only problem is, that when u jump down on certain parts, u will jump down on top of the ledges...9/10

Ninja Caterpie July 26th, 2008 12:39 AM

Nah, he can set it so it won't jump.

Anyway, here's another mappy!
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8333/deisaxv9.png

Chimchar 9 July 26th, 2008 2:21 AM

here iv just made a map its for pokemon ever night hope you like it

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route4.jpg?t=1217067573

please rate

Osher99 July 26th, 2008 10:40 AM

Map Name: Galiel Town (Littelroot Town)

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: Just made it
(My II Map) I'm Begginer =/

Mapshot:

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/4640/galieltownlittelroottowfk1.jpg



Tyrantrum July 26th, 2008 10:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by riolu 9 (Post 3794669)
here iv just made a map its for pokemon ever night hope you like it

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route4.jpg?t=1217067573

please rate

I do love ur map! :D
The only problem is, u can still get past those rocks and get to the border line. :\
Anyways...9/10

Luck July 26th, 2008 1:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dark Lakitu (Post 3794528)
Nah, he can set it so it won't jump.

Anyway, here's another mappy!
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8333/deisaxv9.png

I don't really like this map.
Its obvious that you either edited pewter city or made it to look like it.
it doesn't have errors, but it is empty but gets really crowded.
at least try to make it look less like pewter city.
6.5/10 for similarity
Suggestions: make the map look less like pewter city, and don't make it so empty in some areas but crowded in others.

Quote:

Originally Posted by riolu 9 (Post 3794669)
here iv just made a map its for pokemon ever night hope you like it

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route4.jpg?t=1217067573

please rate

this map is really empty.
there are few trees other than near the border, the mountains all follow the same exact path and don't even move away from each other at least once, the ledge idea is stupid, as is the fence idea.
5/10 for dullness.

Suggestions: Make more mountains, put trees in more places than the border, don't put all the rocks in a row, the ledges just seem stupid, how they are right next to each other, the huge fence line seems really random, and the ocean line is square.
A lot of it just doesn't seem natural. I'm dissapointed in you riolu 9. You could make much better maps than this.
Quote:

Originally Posted by Osher99 (Post 3795342)
Map Name: Galiel Town (Littelroot Town)

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: Just made it
(My II Map) I'm Begginer =/

Mapshot:

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/4640/galieltownlittelroottowfk1.jpg



The flowers are in a row, the area seems just plain boring, and the fences just don't seem necessary to me. However, its supposed to be the first town, so emptiness is expected.
7.5/10
suggestions: It seems crowded, so you should take a house out. Spread the flowers out because it doesn't look natural. And don't use unnecessary fences.

Chimchar 9 July 26th, 2008 1:16 PM

yeah i know i can make better maps but i havent had any support from anyone in ages so my maps have gone wrong and nobody supports my hacks the just let me down by saying you have too many hacks and thats what lets me down aw

Disturbed July 26th, 2008 1:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by riolu 9 (Post 3794669)
here iv just made a map its for pokemon ever night hope you like it

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route4.jpg?t=1217067573

please rate

I give it a 4/10 because it seems like the trees are perfectly lined up, and the fact that you seemed to use the grass as a filler. The mountains are also too perfect it seems, so it looks easily done.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Osher99 (Post 3795342)
Map Name: Galiel Town (Littelroot Town)

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: Just made it
(My II Map) I'm Begginer =/

Mapshot:

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/4640/galieltownlittelroottowfk1.jpg


I kinda like this map, I'll give it an 7/10. I give you that because I like the placement of the houses. Also, the layout of the map is nice.

Quote:

Originally Posted by riolu 9 (Post 3795783)
yeah i know i can make better maps but i havent had any support from anyone in ages so my maps have gone wrong and nobody supports my hacks the just let me down by saying you have too many hacks and thats what lets me down aw

That is because you can't get yourself straight. If people don't like your hacks, they won't support you. Also, if you honestly stick to one or two hacks, and actually put alot of effort into them instead of restarting all the time when one thing goes wrong, people may start to support the hack. And don't blame people for not supporting them.

Osher99 July 26th, 2008 2:04 PM

Map Name: Hotel Path

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: My III Map

Mapshot:

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7995/galielhoteltownoldaletoon9.jpg

+Sneasel™ July 26th, 2008 2:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Osher99 (Post 3795962)
Map Name: Hotel Path

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: My III Map

Mapshot:

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7995/galielhoteltownoldaletoon9.jpg

Nice map, its great and simple, I give it an 8/10. To improve it I suggest just filling in some of that space at the top behind and between the two top houses. I don't know if this is a starting town or not, but if it isn't, I would give it something else, maybe another house (assuming you'd make it bigger).

Mr.Fury July 26th, 2008 3:38 PM

I believe this got flooded out...repost!

Hello again fellas!
I have edited my two maps to my liking, hope they are to yours as well.
1-10 please. :D

Name: Sequil Village
Rom: Fire Red
Original: Pallet Town
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9477/sequilvillagetx6.th.png

Name: Edmond's Crossing
Rom: Fire Red
Original: Ocean bellow Pallet Town
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8738/edmondscrossingkz9.th.png

Disturbed July 26th, 2008 3:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr.Fury (Post 3796255)
I believe this got flooded out...repost!

Hello again fellas!
I have edited my two maps to my liking, hope they are to yours as well.
1-10 please. :D

Name: Sequil Village
Rom: Fire Red
Original: Pallet Town
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9477/sequilvillagetx6.th.png

Name: Edmond's Crossing
Rom: Fire Red
Original: Ocean bellow Pallet Town
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8738/edmondscrossingkz9.th.png

I rather like them. But, due to tile errors all over the place in the first one, and a few in the second, here is my rating:

First Map: 5/10
Second Map: 7/10

Ninja Caterpie July 26th, 2008 3:50 PM

Hummm...
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2352/peninsulavy8.png
Tis another map! BTW, that grass ist special!

Mr.Fury July 26th, 2008 4:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Osher99 (Post 3795962)
Map Name: Hotel Path

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: My III Map

Mapshot:

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7995/galielhoteltownoldaletoon9.jpg

I rather enjoy the house alignment and attention to detail. But the map is a bit to square try to make it less square, i guess, lol.
Also the tip of the trees are supposed to be passable so perhaps use the tree tile that connects to the base of another tree?

Neti July 27th, 2008 6:11 AM

remember this map i posted a few days ago?

i changed the things that you said were not so good and made a new palette.
i also inserted new mountain tiles, i think fallabors mountains fit way better into the desert than the FR ones.
Ratings pls:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu3.png

Osher99 July 27th, 2008 7:09 AM

Map Name: Tylly City (Petalburg City)

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: Whice u like more? (My IV Map) Yeah I'm Begginer =/

Mapshot (1):

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5168/tyllycity1petalburgcityyq5.jpg

Mapshot (2):

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4053/tyllycity2petalburgcityah7.jpg


Chimchar 9 July 27th, 2008 7:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Osher99 (Post 3798290)
Map Name: Tylly City (Petalburg City)

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: Whice u like more? (My IV Map) Yeah I'm Begginer =/

Mapshot (1):

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5168/tyllycity1petalburgcityyq5.jpg

Mapshot (2):

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4053/tyllycity2petalburgcityah7.jpg

i like the first map anyway them mini trees there not right did you know there are attched ones if you look on the tile set well i give the first map 6-10 and the second 4-10

Binary July 27th, 2008 7:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Osher99 (Post 3798290)
Map Name: Tylly City (Petalburg City)

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: Whice u like more? (My IV Map) Yeah I'm Begginer =/

Mapshot (1):

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5168/tyllycity1petalburgcityyq5.jpg

Mapshot (2):

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4053/tyllycity2petalburgcityah7.jpg


Nice to see someone actually use these tiles in a long while since I think Green Forest. The first map wouldn't load for me =(. Anyways, the maps are pretty good for a beginner I must say. But I think you should improve them a little more.
About the second map. I think you shouldn't stack the houses together like that, it looks pretty weird, especially on those tiles. The map is pretty much blank, there are alot of empty spaces. I think you can do far better than that. Try to use different kinds of trees. I don't like that style of tree for this map. The signposts don't match either..

Osher99 July 27th, 2008 2:18 PM

Map Name: Cacti Town (Littelroot TOwn)

Map Game: Emerald Version

Comments: My 5 Map!.. (Begginer) Just Rate it ^^
Thanks ^_^

Mapshot:

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6264/cactitownlittelroottownbv5.jpg



Disturbed July 27th, 2008 2:24 PM

@ Osher

I don't really think the bushes and the flowers really fit into the desert scene. It is one of your better maps though, I'll give you that.

7.5/10

Osher99 July 28th, 2008 8:14 AM

Map Name: Path 300

Game: Fire Red

Comments: Just Rate it ^^ Thanks ^^

Mapshot:

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/6558/path300routh1jz4.jpg


Map Name: Path 150

Game: Emerald

Comments: Just Rate it ^^ Thanks ^^

Mapshot:

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/3581/path150routh101tz6.jpg

Rate Those 2 Just made it last night

Mr.Fury July 28th, 2008 1:29 PM

New map!
3rd map ever!
Fire Red, that town with the ghost marrowak.
Also if anyone could tell me how to insert new tiles I would really enjoy it.
rate it ^_^

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/3199/jenrulecityii7.th.png

Osher99 July 28th, 2008 3:08 PM

Map Name: Laty City

Map Game: Emerald

Comments: Just made it now.. rate it ^^ thanks.

Mapshot:

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/2431/latycityfo6.jpg

Tyrantrum July 28th, 2008 4:40 PM

It's too square, a lot of empty space, the water is plain, and it's obvious it's an edited Slateport City...1.5/10

Lollypop July 28th, 2008 9:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr.Fury (Post 3803904)
New map!
3rd map ever!
Fire Red, that town with the ghost marrowak.
Also if anyone could tell me how to insert new tiles I would really enjoy it.
rate it ^_^

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/3199/jenrulecityii7.th.png

Rating: 5/10.
The tiles do not go with the town. Tile errorsmake the map look weird and thats about it.

Osher99 July 29th, 2008 7:24 AM

Map Name: Foret Island

Map Game: Fire Red.

Comments: Littel Island =) Rate it Thanks ^^

Mapshot:

http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/6186/foretislandtwoislandyq5ds0.jpg



.:God:. July 29th, 2008 7:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Osher99 (Post 3806471)
Map Name: Foret Island

Map Game: Fire Red.

Comments: Littel Island =) Rate it Thanks ^^

Mapshot:

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/8214/foretislandtwoislandyq5.jpg

That map is really good! There is a 2 little tiles error in the corner or the mountain on the bottom, and the sand to grass has 2 tile errors, but it is really good! You really should make a hack!

That map is really good! There is a 2 little tiles error in the corner or the mountain on the bottom, and the sand to grass has 2 tile errors, but it is really good! You really should make a hack!


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