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OK, this is my first map on this thread, and this is what you'll see. Please rate this map and tell me what should be improved.
I didn't make it any square like or anything. Well here it is: Spoiler:
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I like the shape of the map, but the r some empty spaces and too many ledges...8.5/10
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Comments: You guys worry way too much about your map looking square. Take a look at the maps that are already in FR (the Sevii Island ones). Why is there so much randomly placed grass everywhere? It looks terrible, so do the placement of stones and flowers. Same with the trees. Just bad, sorry. I do like how you've tried to incorporate the ledges. But you used way too many and it just looks bad. |
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at the left part there are too many ledges, that should be changed and the small trees there are standing in rows, which is not good the right part is cool to me rating: 7/10 Quote:
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everybody can work things out on their maps that they think are important. in my opinion the shape is like the most important feature of a map, so it shouldnt be boring |
Well, not empty "space", just empty spots. ^_^"
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i dont think so, i think he didnt overdo it or put too less stuff on the map. the placing is nice
but thats a matter of taste |
Well, I guess I'm seeing it in a weird way! :P
Overall, the map is good. :) |
dshayabusa was talking about how good the shape of the Sevii Islands were, not how bad!
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Here's a map by me! :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/abcd.jpg |
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thats a beautiful palette you made there Eeveon
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i just made a map without trying but you might like it so here it is
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/canyon.jpg?t=1216560298 please vote |
@Neti: That's a Rom Base by Christos! XD
@riolu9: It's very good, and the mountains keep it from being too empty. Of course, about the ledges: 1. U can jump onto the rock! O.o 2. The tiny ledges should look like that. :\ ...9/10 |
Here, check out this forest I made :D
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4338/forestmaphg2.jpg Its for a event to catch celebi :) please tell me what you think! |
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I'll give it a... 7.5/10 Why? Props: Nice and long, keeps the player going Grass is placed well Slops: Kinda too long... it would get boring And since I can't see the tile errors, there are probably a ton. Now... for my map: It's the first map for Pokemon Revelation. Here it is: Techlabo Town! http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5637/gamegameboogeynq1.th.png |
The house's shape is funny...
But...oh well. Let's see... The flowers at the bottom are disturbing...Too many of them. The paths are dodgy... And the house has tile errors galore. Also, it's very unrealistic. Who would want ONE LITTLE bit of room to walk in? 5/10 Now for my own map Spoiler:
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Your map- 7/10 tiles placed kinda weird and hard to navigate through the town, but overall its pretty nice. |
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Here is another map of mine.
Map Name: A random town. Map Game: Firered using the Super DP rombase (credit to X buster for it) Comments: This is just for the ratings. Mapshot: http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=995&pictureid=6545 |
Anyone care to rate Apricoa city? :D
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/oldtown.png back in time town. |
you made that map in advance map in a 3rd gen game right?
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Map Name: ????
Map Game: Fire Red http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/TheRiver.jpg Comments: Okay, I realize that there's some tile errors by the fence on the left and the trees on the top. Ignore them! Anyway, this is just a river that probably connects a town/city to a Route. I was just bored, so I made it! |
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I found the tile errors...8.5/10
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Hmm.... 9/10 for effort. 6.5/10 for errors. |
I finally inserted desert tiles, and most of them are complete. Heres a map I made with them:
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-2.jpg Please rate this map for me? :D |
Map Name: Bloom Town
Map Game: FireRed | Veridian City Comments: Just Rate it Quickly, My VERY First map hack. I'm new in hack rom http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1212/veridiancityok1.jpg |
@Austinia: It seems very nice, and I'm not gonna say it's too square because it's a desert! :P
The little water supply like the ponds and lake is very good...9.5/10 @Osher99: I'm not gonna rate ur map for obvious reasons...:\ |
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Too many errors, too empty, too square, and too obvious what place u edited.
This obviously deserves a...0/10 Sry for the harsh rating...:\ |
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if you put my map next to a mapshot of the gold map you cant tell which is the original one |
Not unless you know the GSC palletes because I've seen your's and the pallete is just a tiny bit different.
Anyway, Austinia, loving it. I like the water, shallow ponds, shape (don't care if it's square) and the cacti placement. Lovely. 8/10 |
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First of all you can't use those tiles because they were made by Lex. But i i rate your map. Well its really squarish. the water don't look good.
4.5/10 |
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did u take the tiles out of the rombase on your own or did i send mine to you and you just edited the tileset a bit? im just wondering |
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EDIT: I think its against the rules to double post so I'll add my newest map to this post! http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/mytown.png Could someone rate it please? :D |
those desert maps look truely awesome, the ygive me a good preview of how my desert region will turn out since im using the same tiles^^
i did so many ice maps, theyre so normal to me now that i like desert once much more xD i think ill continue mapping LoF now edit: what do you think of my latest map: Map Name: Shaqiu Hack: Legend of Fenju Game: FireRed Mapshot: http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu.png Comments: First Village of Huoshi and pls tell me, whicch palette would you prefer, the first one or this one: Spoiler:
i think the sand iss better in the first one and the roofs, plants and mountains look better in the second one, so ill probably mix em up |
Okay, back to rating maps. Like db, I am very critical and harsh with my ratings. Maybe not AS harsh, but still harsh. Here we go!
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It feels crowded. The house on the left feels too close to the exit. The gray rocks do not fit in the desert. Everything else seems alright. It's a nice little town. I think the placement of the houses could be improved though. Make the map a little bigger. 6/10 As for which palette, I leave you instead with a question. Do you want a more evil looking town, or a happier, more pleasant town? Cause the first palette gives the town this dark and mysterious look such as in the old western movies. The second palette gives it a more welcoming and inviting town look. :] |
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but i dont think theyre too bad, so i jsut posted the map to look what other ppl think about them. i think ill change tose things about the palettes: ive decided to take the second one, but with another palette. the sand is darker as in the first image, but still more yellow, not so orange |
Ok, two new maps here, what do you people think?
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Ratings and opinions please? (are the images showing up? My comp sometimes wont show them to me, but can you see them, if not, please tell me) |
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i dont see the images either
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Try these (I wasn't using Imageshack before, Try it now in these spoilers ^) |
yea i knew that map wasnt very good i was just trying to get a map on here becuz ive been trying for a while to do it^_^
@blackrainbow:Everyone uses others tiles its not wrong^_^ At least my map is original.LOL |
oh yeah it is. You have to get permission to use it.
Sorry for spamming |
Or else it would be considered thievery.
here is a map i made, its supposed to be a semi-tropical route. Spoiler:
tell me if you don't see it. and please use constructive criticism since this is the first completed map i've made in a while. honestly, im a bit dissapointed in this map. Edit: If anyone woders why the trees are like that, its because i just hate trees with patterns. its not very natural to me.And also, i have changed the grass to be R/S/E like, leaving more space. |
hey i love that map, it looks really nice!
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Anyways, i found another map, but i made this map more mountainous since a crater apparently landed into the center(erosion took care of the crater). i made this map to be more mountainous, but i put trees because i just hate treeless areas. Spoiler:
like before, please give a detailed description about what is wrong. i really don't like this map much because it seems really crowded, but i do like the mountain tile placement. And again, tell me if you don't see it. Oh, and the barred door is just as useless as the white rock in mossdeep. Just an easter egg. |
Hiya! i've got a map i've been working on here...
what do u people think 'bout it? Map Name: Frotus Town Hack: Legend of Hatichu Game: FireRed Mapshot: http://i34.*.com/ir2hkx.jpg |
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Hi, I've been
working on a Desert Town for some time now and I thought I ought to post it and see what people thinks of it. Map Name: Subaku Town Hack: Pokemon Nature Force (Not posted on PC yet) Game: Firered BPRE Sorry xP Ruby AXVE http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5898/subakutowncn4.png |
44tim44 i really like your map. it has a nice layout and really awesome tiles. maybe you should put some more trees in it?
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44tim44 that is a really good map i wish i could do somthing like that i would give it a 9/10 only because nothing is ever perfect
@blackrainbow-thnks for telling me and ill just use the ones atr whack a hack cuz they already give you permission as long as you give the creator credit for the tiles |
@44tim44: It's a good map, the tiles r excellent, just add a few more holes and rocks...8.5/10
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The town is too bunched up and gets too empty. there are no rocks in the water, it seems really dull, the top of the mountain tiles seem weird,and the mountain placement just doesn't look that good. there isn't much to expect from a desert town but it could still be better. 6.8/10 for emptiness. Edit: I know no one ever reads the page before the last page, so i'll put my previous maps on here. Spoiler:
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i really like your map, nice simple with great tiles. 9/10 ^_^
*edit* didnt feel like double posting, so ill post my map here. Name: Sequil Village (iunno were it came from, just liked it) ROM: Fire Red Original: Pallet Town Please rate and comment 1-10 And keep in mind this is my first succesful map i have made, just for fun. http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/2892/sequilvillagexj9.th.png Also i am possibly looking for a tutor/mentor for hacking. ^_^ |
On the map, the ends of the path are kinda not so good. Make sure you are using the right tiles that make it flow. You need to find the connecter for the vertical and horizontal paths. Right now, they are just clashing together.
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I have to say I am pretty happy with this city I just made... it took forever making the palettes and inserting the tiles but here it is!
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/SitruaCity.png Sitrua City from my Pokemon hack (Oak's Murder) |
I simply love the placement of everything, especially the trees! :D
Very good...9.5/10 |
okay this is the first map of my hack pokemon deep blue/transform
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7205/waterfalltownyj6.th.png yes i know that there are some errors this is just a rough copy of it please rate! |
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Without caring about errors 8/10. I like the shape of the map. The shape is pretty good too. |
Dude, don't post unfinished maps. Ya know, half of the points are for how the map actually is...
2/10 because you're lazy. _____________________ Now, this is my map. It's a peninsula... Oh, by the way, that grass has something special so...yeah. http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2352/peninsulavy8.png |
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name: the final gym leaders house
game:ruby comments:if i make a hack this will be in it thanks to vincent for inserting the tiles ^_^ |
Thank you for the help...I will try to find them.
I made another map, it took a while, i like the outcome, but seeing as this is my second map, im not an expert. Please rate 1-10 and add constructive critiscm. ^_^ Name: Edmond's Crossing (*shrugs*) ROM: FireRed Orginal: The water below pallet town, forgot what the route is called. http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/7937/edmondscrossinggm7.th.png |
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sorry for posting it twice i didnt think the first one worked
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Rating: 6/10
Reason: I like it, Mr.Fury. The way that everything flows on your map. I just don't like how the 2-story house looks. That may just be me, though. Everything else is good, though. Suggestions: So, just find a way to fix that house. Oh, and when going on that ladder/stairway up the rock the one stairway that is more of at the top of the rock doesn't look so good. Rating: 4/10 Reason: It just looks boring, emoakt. It's not good to leave empty grass in some places. Suggestions: Maybe add some flowers or trees or something in some of those empty spaces. Map Name: Rodiok Island Game: Fire Red Comments: This is my second try at making this map. This time I started from scratch, so I could get it too look like the sketch I made. The island revolves around that little PoKeFarm right there. Spoiler:
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thanks for the comments ill do that netdot5 and i think your map is 6.5/10
because there is a mis map with the fence in back of the two doored house? and you could probably get rid of one of the docks. ^_^ also the ridges are kinda weird lookin lined up like that |
Thank you for the help!
I really didnt like the house either so im gonna fill that space with trees and stuff, but i will leave the pokecenter and mart...and im not sure what you are talking about with the mountain. When i am finished i will post another pic, but with sprites ^_^ @ your map. 7/10 I really like the flow of it, but it seems to big and there is a lot of open space, so perhaps fill it with more stuff or just make it smaller, and maybe a little less square. other than that its really good. |
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I edited the colors and i added a few things please rate ^_^
i also changed the sprites a bit |
I give it an 7.7/10 :) (emoakt)
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Hello again fellas!
I have edited my two maps to my liking, hope they are to yours as well. 1-10 please. :D Name: Sequil Village Rom: Fire Red Original: Pallet Town http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9477/sequilvillagetx6.th.png Name: Edmond's Crossing Rom: Fire Red Original: Ocean bellow Pallet Town http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8738/edmondscrossingkz9.th.png |
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/8320/route410ff1.png
Route 409 for my hack ^_~ tell me your opinions! |
I love the shape! :D
The only problem is, that when u jump down on certain parts, u will jump down on top of the ledges...9/10 |
Nah, he can set it so it won't jump.
Anyway, here's another mappy! http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8333/deisaxv9.png |
here iv just made a map its for pokemon ever night hope you like it
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route4.jpg?t=1217067573 please rate |
Map Name: Galiel Town (Littelroot Town)
Map Game: Emerald Version Comments: Just made it (My II Map) I'm Begginer =/ Mapshot: http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/4640/galieltownlittelroottowfk1.jpg |
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The only problem is, u can still get past those rocks and get to the border line. :\ Anyways...9/10 |
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Its obvious that you either edited pewter city or made it to look like it. it doesn't have errors, but it is empty but gets really crowded. at least try to make it look less like pewter city. 6.5/10 for similarity Suggestions: make the map look less like pewter city, and don't make it so empty in some areas but crowded in others. Quote:
there are few trees other than near the border, the mountains all follow the same exact path and don't even move away from each other at least once, the ledge idea is stupid, as is the fence idea. 5/10 for dullness. Suggestions: Make more mountains, put trees in more places than the border, don't put all the rocks in a row, the ledges just seem stupid, how they are right next to each other, the huge fence line seems really random, and the ocean line is square. A lot of it just doesn't seem natural. I'm dissapointed in you riolu 9. You could make much better maps than this. Quote:
7.5/10 suggestions: It seems crowded, so you should take a house out. Spread the flowers out because it doesn't look natural. And don't use unnecessary fences. |
yeah i know i can make better maps but i havent had any support from anyone in ages so my maps have gone wrong and nobody supports my hacks the just let me down by saying you have too many hacks and thats what lets me down aw
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Map Name: Hotel Path
Map Game: Emerald Version Comments: My III Map Mapshot: http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7995/galielhoteltownoldaletoon9.jpg |
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I believe this got flooded out...repost!
Hello again fellas! I have edited my two maps to my liking, hope they are to yours as well. 1-10 please. :D Name: Sequil Village Rom: Fire Red Original: Pallet Town http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9477/sequilvillagetx6.th.png Name: Edmond's Crossing Rom: Fire Red Original: Ocean bellow Pallet Town http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8738/edmondscrossingkz9.th.png |
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First Map: 5/10 Second Map: 7/10 |
Hummm...
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2352/peninsulavy8.png Tis another map! BTW, that grass ist special! |
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Also the tip of the trees are supposed to be passable so perhaps use the tree tile that connects to the base of another tree? |
remember this map i posted a few days ago?
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Map Name: Tylly City (Petalburg City)
Map Game: Emerald Version Comments: Whice u like more? (My IV Map) Yeah I'm Begginer =/ Mapshot (1): http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5168/tyllycity1petalburgcityyq5.jpg Mapshot (2): http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4053/tyllycity2petalburgcityah7.jpg |
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About the second map. I think you shouldn't stack the houses together like that, it looks pretty weird, especially on those tiles. The map is pretty much blank, there are alot of empty spaces. I think you can do far better than that. Try to use different kinds of trees. I don't like that style of tree for this map. The signposts don't match either.. |
Map Name: Cacti Town (Littelroot TOwn)
Map Game: Emerald Version Comments: My 5 Map!.. (Begginer) Just Rate it ^^ Thanks ^_^ Mapshot: http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6264/cactitownlittelroottownbv5.jpg |
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I don't really think the bushes and the flowers really fit into the desert scene. It is one of your better maps though, I'll give you that. 7.5/10 |
Map Name: Path 300
Game: Fire Red Comments: Just Rate it ^^ Thanks ^^ Mapshot: http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/6558/path300routh1jz4.jpg Map Name: Path 150 Game: Emerald Comments: Just Rate it ^^ Thanks ^^ Mapshot: http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/3581/path150routh101tz6.jpg Rate Those 2 Just made it last night |
New map!
3rd map ever! Fire Red, that town with the ghost marrowak. Also if anyone could tell me how to insert new tiles I would really enjoy it. rate it ^_^ http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/3199/jenrulecityii7.th.png |
Map Name: Laty City
Map Game: Emerald Comments: Just made it now.. rate it ^^ thanks. Mapshot: http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/2431/latycityfo6.jpg |
It's too square, a lot of empty space, the water is plain, and it's obvious it's an edited Slateport City...1.5/10
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The tiles do not go with the town. Tile errorsmake the map look weird and thats about it. |
Map Name: Foret Island
Map Game: Fire Red. Comments: Littel Island =) Rate it Thanks ^^ Mapshot: http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/6186/foretislandtwoislandyq5ds0.jpg |
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