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Surf December 8th, 2008 8:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TehTehTehTeh (Post 4181300)
Good but, those little houses are ugly :\ sorry 6.5/10

Final Map Edit

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/6084/picture1wi5.png

Interesting i like the trees and the kyledove trainer school and the paths
8\10

EDIT- The grass has no point really I'd recomend removing it

~Teh Panda~ December 8th, 2008 9:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mac_Mini (Post 4181307)
Interesting i like the trees and the kyledove trainer school and the paths
8\10

EDIT- The grass has no point really I'd recomend removing it

Regarding my map to Mod's

You cannot see this in game (grass) so I just filled the area up

Ninja Caterpie December 8th, 2008 9:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Xray (Post 4180431)
I'm sorry for being harsh, but constructive criticism will make you a better mapper..

Very constructive. Yeah, saying to put the ROM out of it's misery is VERY constructive.

King Kris, take a look at R/S/E's original mapping, and at other maps around here. Get a good idea of...well, how NOT to map and how to map. Then, fix up the map and we'll all give you a proper rating. :P

Hiche.. December 9th, 2008 1:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TehTehTehTeh (Post 4181300)
Good but, those little houses are ugly :\ sorry 6.5/10

Final Map Edit

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/6084/picture1wi5.png

All in all, the map is outstanding. :D
I really like the new trees you used. Kyedolove tiles are inserted pretty good. I like the street tiles, which I presume, you made, no?

Rating: 8.4/10

Gundam-Fighter December 9th, 2008 4:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vrai (Post 4178465)
Sorry for the bold. I just wanted it to stand out, I guess.

Why can't a town have grass? Honestly, it's more of an island than a town, and you would expect it to be uninhabited by people, and to have plenty of wild things. There's also a thing called "people events", and I believe that t.A.T.u. could make like a flying Pokémon that could take you out of that town, or a boat, perhaps. And, honestly, that's about a minutes' walk from one house to another. Don't you spend about that much time in a route or a large city, anyways? I think you're just feeling lazy inside. ^^

And, as another point that I just now noticed, the grass doesn't begin until you get to the lab. There's a single spot to walk through, so one might assume that t.A.T.u. would put in a script to prevent you from getting there until you go through the lab and get your Pokémon.

The place is called Taty Town, therefore it's a town.
It's a town so it will have people.
I said that there was nothing noticeable. I didn't say there was nothing.
One minutes walk in pokemon is too long for a town it's fine for a city just not a town.
That's not my point though. There shouldn't be grass in a Town. It's a social area.

manomow December 9th, 2008 5:21 AM

"Good but, those little houses are ugly :\ sorry 6.5/10"

hey you used the SAME houses. If its ugly, why are you using those houses.

Neti December 9th, 2008 5:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by manomow (Post 4181784)
"Good but, those little houses are ugly :\ sorry 6.5/10"

hey you used the SAME houses. If its ugly, why are you using those houses.

please quote properly, nobody knows who you are quoting and where we can read it

~Teh Panda~ December 9th, 2008 7:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by manomow (Post 4181784)
"Good but, those little houses are ugly :\ sorry 6.5/10"

hey you used the SAME houses. If its ugly, why are you using those houses.

The little roofing on them.... Not the house itself.

Tropical Sunlight December 9th, 2008 10:02 AM

Map name: Temple Entrance
Hack: Pokemon ??? (I'm not telling)
Base rom: FireRed English (BPRE)
Mapshot:
http://www.shrani.si/f/2R/xW/2tJNvMzS/surprise.png
Comments: Guess what
Credits: Wesley FG for the temple tiles

I inserted the tiles myself! Am I good or not? (joke)

sab December 9th, 2008 4:31 PM

Here is a map made by me I hope it is better han the last one I made.
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2244/coolliteralygx5.png
credit to neti for tiles.

0m3GA ARS3NAL December 9th, 2008 5:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sab (Post 4182926)
Here is a map made by me I hope it is better han the last one I made.
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2244/coolliteralygx5.png
credit to neti for tiles.

It is a nice map, pretty good overall, except the bridges... I dont like them, hehe...

7/10

cooley December 9th, 2008 6:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sab (Post 4182926)
Here is a map made by me I hope it is better han the last one I made.
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2244/coolliteralygx5.png
credit to neti for tiles.

The map looks like an edit of Route 1 in Firered. Please, make a completely new map , before attempting to create one. It is also very squared, and there isn't any particular reason for those three Cave entrances.

Final rating 7/10
Please fix your mistakes

sasquatchd00d December 9th, 2008 6:52 PM

New map.

Comments: Half-forest, half-route. It's rather basic.
ROM: Fire Red BPRE
Map Name: Enare Timberland
Credits: Alistair - signpost

Map:

~Teh Panda~ December 9th, 2008 9:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sasquatchd00d (Post 4183254)
New map.

Comments: Half-forest, half-route. It's rather basic.
ROM: Fire Red BPRE
Map Name: Enare Timberland
Credits: Alistair - signpost

Map:

Very nice placement of your tiles, 8/10

ACTUAL FINAL MAP EDIT OF MINE~

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/537/awesomeov5.png

пзо December 10th, 2008 12:29 PM

First map!
 
My first map ever! So I would like it if you dont post to harshly!

Map name: Un-named
Base: Pokemon Fire Red
Comments.. I always have room to change!

http://i36.*.com/2nbc1ao.jpg

~Teh Panda~ December 10th, 2008 5:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by пзо (Post 4184441)
My first map ever! So I would like it if you dont post to harshly!

Map name: Un-named
Base: Pokemon Fire Red
Comments.. I always have room to change!

http://i36.*.com/2nbc1ao.jpg

7/10 for first map, a bit small plus bland, nice tree placement but a tile error on the right.
Also how do you get out?

Binary December 11th, 2008 7:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TehTehTehTeh (Post 4183455)
Very nice placement of your tiles, 8/10

ACTUAL FINAL MAP EDIT OF MINE~

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/537/awesomeov5.png

Rating: 9/10
Reason: I like the idea of the map. I like the road and the placement of the buildings. The Giratina-style building on the right looks nice. I don't like the green flowers. The petals can't be green, can they?

Quote:

Originally Posted by пзо (Post 4184441)
My first map ever! So I would like it if you dont post to harshly!

Map name: Un-named
Base: Pokemon Fire Red
Comments.. I always have room to change!

http://i36.*.com/2nbc1ao.jpg

Rating: 8.5/10
Reason: For your first map it's very good. My first map was much much worse than this XD. The placement of the trees is good. But I don't like the combination of the D/P tree with the FR/LG tree. Nice little paths and I like the pond in the middle 8D. There are no connections, not that it matters much. And fix the error on the tree.

zetavares85 December 11th, 2008 1:36 PM

http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=011234zx8.png

Map Name: New Island
Map Game: I didn't used Advance map to create it so it doesn't have a base game
Comments: As I've said I didn't used Advance Map, I used Tiled to make it; that's above the Orange Islands and below Sevii Islands. If you want to use it message me first.

Makorin December 13th, 2008 7:30 AM

OK since i havnt post a map in a while i mite as well!

Map Name: Tohja Desert
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: This map is a special area in my Hack Pokemon Golden Rainbow
Mapshot:http://i376.photobucket.com/albums/oo208/Mew_Ryn/th_TohjaDesert430.jpg

Map Name: Tohja Desert
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: This map is a special area in my Hack Pokemon Golden Rainbow
Mapshot:http://i376.photobucket.com/albums/oo208/Mew_Ryn/th_TohjaDesert431.jpg

Aljam December 13th, 2008 10:56 AM

Map name: SNOWDRIFT CITY
Hack name: Pokemon reign of fire
http://i443.photobucket.com/albums/qq151/aljam_66/SNOWDRIFT-1.png

Liquid Shadow December 13th, 2008 9:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by halobro35 (Post 4161186)
Hey all, I made another map called Shorley Town.

Like I stated earlier, I'm new to mapping and this is only my third map, so please feel free to critique me and give me advice.

Here it is:

http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/8758/mapletowncv9.png

Quoting myself since nobody rated it... I think..

Spherical Ice December 14th, 2008 1:48 AM

Map Name: WILD FOREST
Map of: FireRed
Mapshot: Click
Comments: Saved as .JPG to prevent theft (not that anyone would want to XP).

Ninja Caterpie December 14th, 2008 2:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zaangoose (Post 4193685)
Map Name: WILD FOREST
Map of: FireRed
Mapshot: Click
Comments: Saved as .JPG to prevent theft (not that anyone would want to XP).

4/10
It's painfully grassy...Isn't there another way you could take up space? I mean, it's like you just used it as a filler.

Oh, and I DID steal it - although you can't really steal maps. If someone wanted that map in their game, they could just copy it from the site. :\ And as a file on the comp, it ain't much easier. :\

Cheesymitten December 14th, 2008 2:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aljam (Post 4191523)
Map name: SNOWDRIFT CITY
Hack name: Pokemon reign of fire
http://i443.photobucket.com/albums/qq151/aljam_66/SNOWDRIFT-1.png

Veeeery nice 9.5/10 i like how the tiles are in with everything i can't see any errors..... Good work!

Binary December 14th, 2008 7:34 AM

Map Name: Route101
Base: Pokemon Ruby
Comments: A ma after a long time. It has no grass because the player doesn't have any pokemon at this stage.
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/9638/amp2uv7.png


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