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A Redo of the Town:
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x18/Cooley833/NewTown.jpg Comments. Suggestions DO NOT STEAL THE PALETTES, OR THE TREE TILES! |
nice, but you could just remove the tree in that little island. It really looks sad 'cause it's all alone... T_T
:D Eheheh, anyways, i like it better this time. 9/10 ;) |
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Feel free to use my palette. Map in Pokemon: Rocket's Revenge. Yes, I know there are a few tile errors, I know them already, and have been fixed, this it outdated, please don't post about them. |
I like the map, the use of the palette gives it a nice feel.
One question, do you continue onto another map from the right side? Down in the bottom right theres a space to walk through. 9/10 |
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@*~*TwiLiTeDaRkRai*~*: This map looks alright, maybe not too many holes in the wall or create a massive hole where the water flows from and fix up some waterfalls as they don't appear right. My favourite part is the right hand side, so I'll give this a 6/10.
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@Poke-Roy: Your map is good and looks original, a little tiling error(one of the trees near the house with the two doors, to the left and a little bit down) and maybe fill up the space behind and below the Pokemon centre, then it should be really good! I'll give it an 8/10.
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Wow, so many maps I have left uncommented on such a short period of time. Don't expect big comments about them this time ;)
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I don't really think the rocky path fits Ecruteak. Well, as you know, its something already mapped so don't expect much on my rating. Rating->7/10 Quote:
Just a little touch, I wouldn't use the flower tiles so ordered That palette doesn't helps either... Rating->6/10 Quote:
But, definitely, you need to improve the sea on the south of the map (add rocks there, they'll usually make the maps be more filled up with something), and the exit to the northeast (a bit too empty to my liking) Just fill up those areas a bit more and it'll be good enough, but as I said before, the palette really doesn't helps (it's unnatural) Rating->6/10 Quote:
You could fill up some areas that seem a bit empty with some flowers tiles. But, the main concern here, is the eastern border of the map. I dont remember how Viridian is originally on FR, but you should put some trees there, just leaving it empty takes some originality, and, since the map is supposed to be a redo, you could add some extra tiles that weren't on the original. Well, that's what I think... I also wonder about those grass tiles on the city, wild Pokemon there? Hmmm... I wont rate it that good, because in the end, and you said it already, it's just a mod to an existing map. Rating->7/10 Quote:
Additionally, if you could, you should use the other blue colored roof tile for one of the houses. Who says all of the houses should be of the same color? As I said before, small, I don't really like seeing the starter town's maps... Rating->6/10 Quote:
On the other hand, there's nothing much to add, the map is fine, nothing too spectacular Rating->7/10 Quote:
The only thing I don't like is that... green... thing on the entrance to the town, I'd prefer using the posts, but maybe you thought it was more original (and it is, I personally don't like it, it's just that) A good example for other starter town maps! Rating->9/10 Quote:
I think this map turned out to be a bit too small, I think it should have been a bit bigger in relity (stuff is too compressed, that's my impression) Rating->7/10 Now, regarding the second map, it's another nice route. But, I'm gonna tell you that it doesn't have a good design in my opinion. Why? Because the player will only have to go from left to right, right to left, left to right, right to left, and that is really boring (if that was the effect you were looking for, then you'll be sucessful). I'd think a bit more about the design of how you want the player to walk around the map. Rating->8/10 Quote:
Anyway, regarding the map, I'd personally have used a few more trees instead of that gray path on the southwest of the map (I really don't understand what that's supposed to be, but it doesn't look good) About the tile problem thethethethe mentioned (the one of the tree and the ledge with the water), I think that is something that you cannot solve with the Block Editor, so, I'd suggest you to move the tree one step down. Well, I need to stop seeing the map, my eyes are screaming... XD Rating->7/10 Quote:
There's only one thing that I'll ask you for that map, and that is, the use of more rocks on the ocean (unless you are using rocks as the border, but that would make the map too square and boring), add a variety of rocks (randomly, if you want), and the map will be nice. Rating->8/10 Quote:
I think that if it had a bit more effort on adding some extra tiles, it could turn out as a better map. Rating->6/10 Quote:
It's a very original map, with tiles variation on the exact measure. I may not like all of your tiles (or maybe the palette, a bit), but still on terms of mapping this is one of the best maps I've seen (only surpassed by that forest map you showed us before) Rating->10/10 Quote:
The good thing about it is that that strange roof made me laugh for a while :P Rating->6/10 Well, that's all I could quote without turning crazy... So, the rest for later! |
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And the remake was a one timer..;) |
Heres a map from my new hack, it's the starting town.
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palletd for cliff are wierd 7/10 its a nice map the cliff pallet lets it down i think |
OK, let's finish the rest of the maps now...
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I prefered that big mountain instead of the change you did on the top of the map, now it sounds a bit more like a "common map" Anyway, was it supposed to be a town? With just two houses? Hmmm... I'd put one or two more houses (closed, if you want), because two sounds a bit too few. I'll give you the same rating, though I liked the other map, with the fixes and the palette of the second. Rating->7/10 Quote:
To begin with, it's a wonderful palette to give the impression that its nighttime, this just adds to the originality of the map. Regarding the map itself, it's good to see two completely different parts on the same map, a small part with lots of green and trees, and a second, more mountainous part (specially, I liked the fact of seeing a few of your plans with the events images) With the errors fixed this map would be really good, considering them it's... Rating->8/10 Quote:
For the rest, I always like variation on tiles for the same map, and this one has them. The only thing is that maybe that path on the east part of the map is a bit too wide to my liking. Rating->8/10 Quote:
I really love that map, it must've taken quite a lot of time to make it. It has something weird on it (that strange house with that roof we'd be able to walk below), though I don't know if the map itself would classify as a town (more like a forest to me) By the way, just work on fixing the pallet for the bottom of the trees, the green there doesn't match with your palette for the green ground. Add some flowers or those patches of flowers you used on the weird house more on the southeast corner of the map, where the PC is located, it'll make it look better. It's really good, keep it up! Rating->9/10 Quote:
By the way, that thing sounds too weird to be a house. Hope you have something good planned for it, and it's not the town's Lab :P It just needs more work on the part of the town, the beach and that was good, that's why it gets... Rating->7/10 |
The little red house is a small sea cottage.
I didn't want to overdo the town so I made it a little simple. |
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The first one. At first I used the fence but then I had a little skinny green path. So I removed the path from that spot and it didn't look right to me. So I made it the green bush(or whatever you call it) and I liked the look of it so I kept it. The second and third I was never happy with. I'd do something and then change it to something else. Everything just looked 'incorrect' to me, I'm going to 'fix' the second one. When I'm happy with it I may re-post it(not likely), because I'm thinking of using that as a route in LoD. Well, I haven't gotten that far in LoD that I can see if the border will have problems. I guess I'll find out when I get that far. I should also explain the arrangement of the trees. I'm sick of seeing trees in line and perfect and straight, in reality, have you ever seen that in real life?. They're all over the place. Since posting that map I've made quite a few changes. I've taken Frostbites advice and changed the path a bit and changed the houses to the island, and some other little changes/fixes that have hopefully made it look a bit better. |
Awwe mann!
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I really like it, Its plain and simple and good. 8/10 |
Name: Greenville town
Map from: Fire red Comments: I messed up the grass in Block editor, I an fix it though. http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd251/kditsme1300/greenvilletown.jpg |
You should add some empty house i think
because it feels too empty. i would move the mart from where it is to another place 8/10 pals are very nice |
My New map, Made by Celebi_XD!
Please Rate. I rate it 10/10. http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x18/Cooley833/Route3-1.jpg -cooley |
10/10
Its one of the best ones ive ever seen. It's a beautiful map not too cramped or to empty its perfect. the pallets really complement this well made map The water at the top gives it a nice look and i love the tree's at the bottom. |
Why are you posting a map made by someone else. Anyway, I give it 9/10 only because the outside of the sandy path was left unpalette edited. It still shows the colour of the original grass. Other than that it looks pretty good.
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You showed my map hehe It looks darn good, I thought it was worse than this, Maybe because I was up at night :D And thanks for the rating everyone :) Quote:
I like the pals you have used, but i think it could be done better. |
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game: Fire Red.. comments: please rate? and give suggestions =) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee239/pkmnkristian/mappic.jpg |
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