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Name: Maraudah's Icy Cave of Perpentual Doom
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It was some CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM for those freaking maps. It's what you put them in this thread for! An I don't get the part about "figure out the god dang piece of crap on your own..." ANYWAYS Maraudah. I don't really...uh...get the cave and...uh...it's kinda weird. Is it meant to be really deep with a funny border or something? Anyway, it's well shaped and *seems* to be some puzzle. 8/10 |
This is my first time mapping a cave.
Any comments r greatly appreciated. http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/icy.jpg |
It seems quite nice and small, Eeveon. It's a good map for a first try :)
I can perfectly understand the puzzle and the shapes of the cave are nice. Great map, overall! Just a SMALL question, what is the border? EDIT: Ack! I forgot to give a rating! 8.5 |
Thanx! ^^
The border is the white part on top of the mountains. |
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why do you post maps here if you offend ppl who critisze them? that is the purpouse of this thread! you dont post your maps here to be told that they are good. if they are perfect, you dodnt need to post them here. if youre still learning and need to know whats not good about your maps, then post them here and let ppl tell you what they dont like. and if you have another opinion about the things they say: fine. but dont be offensive |
Eeveeon, if the border's going to be the white stuff, then you can run into the border at the place with the hole!!
Ah, and Neti, great job. I could tell you were flared up because your grammar there is absolutely terrible. |
did you mean my grammar? xD thats possible since im no native englsih speaker xD
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Togepi Paradise - Pokemon Black Doom
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i like that big building and the small eggs^^ where did you get the tiles from? or did you make them on your own?
i dislike the gyms roof and that there is a lot of unused space the shape is cool with me rating? well caused by all this unused space and so much path on the map: 6/10 |
Map name: Eidolon Forest (not from FF9!)
Original map: Viridian Forest Map:http://shrani.si/t/R/Tz/3uDCg0ve/eidolon-forest.jpg Connections: none Credits: CheesePeow for rombase, me for some palette changing and most importantly, Grosser Block, it helped me to finish this map in 38 minutes 6 seconds |
Ok, i made two more maps. Lets go in order shall we?
Ever Green Town (Starting Town) - Here, the player will start out, and the purpose of the other lab at the lower side is that it is a Cloning Lab, where scientist do weird experiments with Pokemon, this area will be reachable after the 5th gym leader has been defeated. Spoiler:
Silver Waters (where you receive your Pokemon and catch the "Sacred Legend") - Here, you will receive you very first Pokemon, (the choices will be out of Trapinch, Dratini, and Bagon) in the upper right cave. The bigger cave on the left side will be the Legendary Pokemon's hideout, and after you exit the cave, there will be a secret place to the very left (thats why you see some stairs to the left end) where you catch the Sacred Legend (after seeing him in the cave, he runs away to the left end). Theres nothing special about the little island..and i guess thats it for this map. Spoiler:
Route 1 - Well, here you will battle against your rival for the first time, and the lake down on the lower left is just so you use surf across to the Cloning Lab. Spoiler:
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http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/3263/town1cd7.png
Well, my ROM crashed so I restarted and here's my First Town Take II. |
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Also, there's a distinct lack of any "activity" in the map - more flowers, small blocks in the route, ledges, some interesting filler for the top-right corner would all be welcome! 5/10 |
[img=http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/4709/littleroottownliterallyey8.th.png]
Ok, here's my map. It is littleroot town. Over they years, it has split off and shifted across to the region of Deserto (sorta like africa) where it is really hot. Notes: 1= This is where you catch Salamence after the 5th Gym and where you catch Scrought (new desert legendary) after E4. 2= This is Professor Birch 5th lab. The "5th" is because it has been so long since the split off so Birch has died. There were more Birches too. 3= Hero and May 4th's houses. Same drill with May, except May and Brendan had babies. 4= Path to where you catch Ho-Oh. There is a cut tree, a rock and a surf zone so you have to have all 8 badges. |
two maps from my upcoming hack white light
the first is the route leading up to the final city http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m225/bitrzo/6copy.gif and here is the final city http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m225/bitrzo/4.jpg |
http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view¤t=cm.jpg
The empty island at the bottom is where you arrive by a flying vehicle. |
The map is good, but there r some tile errors...7/10
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Littleroot town!
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The map looks the same, just a bigger place with a few added thing. :\
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Your map doesn't look very natural. Too many cacti. Those trees shouldn't be there. Trees like that die in deserts. And there are no ledges like that in real deserts. There are only cliffs and sand duns. Ledges like that are weathered away extremely quickly if they do appear. Which the usually don't. Edit: Now I realize that it is just like the normal LittleRoot Town. Just a new connections and tiles. 0.1 for the tiles. And even those aren't really "wow". Sorry. |
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1. Don't save it in grid mode, hard to look at. 2. It's the exact same as Littleroot but bigger and with grass, a Mart and a rock. 3. You don't REALLY need all those trees at the bottom. If I gave you a rating, I would cringe... Spoiler:
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Map Name: Sonara Desert
Map of: Pokémon Zephyr Map: Spoiler:
Rate please and also positive and constructive comments :D |
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Here is the starting town Navzi Town for my Fire Red hack called Naturo Verde. http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/map.png |
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