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Disturbed June 28th, 2008 4:45 PM

Name: Maraudah's Icy Cave of Perpentual Doom

Ninja Caterpie June 28th, 2008 4:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JAing_The_AfterShockWave (Post 3712300)
I'm sorry for saying this but, you need to freakin' figure the god dang piece of crap out on your own...
Me and eeveon had this conversation via PM. I mide these maps on my own. If I can't be respected for what I make, then kiss my shiny metal ass good-bye...
I feel sorry for anyone who reads this and I'll take full respondibility for what I said... I am, from now on, always been ready to take all respondsibility...

I did freaking respect you by rating those maps.
It was some CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM for those freaking maps. It's what you put them in this thread for!

An I don't get the part about "figure out the god dang piece of crap on your own..."

ANYWAYS
Maraudah.
I don't really...uh...get the cave and...uh...it's kinda weird.
Is it meant to be really deep with a funny border or something?

Anyway, it's well shaped and *seems* to be some puzzle.

8/10

Tyrantrum June 28th, 2008 8:15 PM

This is my first time mapping a cave.
Any comments r greatly appreciated.

http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/icy.jpg

Ninja Caterpie June 28th, 2008 8:47 PM

It seems quite nice and small, Eeveon. It's a good map for a first try :)
I can perfectly understand the puzzle and the shapes of the cave are nice.
Great map, overall!

Just a SMALL question, what is the border?

EDIT:
Ack!
I forgot to give a rating!
8.5

Tyrantrum June 28th, 2008 9:01 PM

Thanx! ^^
The border is the white part on top of the mountains.

Neti June 29th, 2008 3:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JAing_The_AfterShockWave (Post 3712300)
I'm sorry for saying this but, you need to freakin' figure the god dang piece of crap out on your own...
Me and eeveon had this conversation via PM. I mide these maps on my own. If I can't be respected for what I make, then kiss my shiny metal ass good-bye...
I feel sorry for anyone who reads this and I'll take full respondibility for what I said... I am, from now on, always been ready to take all respondsibility...

*lowers reputation points*

why do you post maps here if you offend ppl who critisze them? that is the purpouse of this thread!
you dont post your maps here to be told that they are good. if they are perfect, you dodnt need to post them here. if youre still learning and need to know whats not good about your maps, then post them here and let ppl tell you what they dont like.
and if you have another opinion about the things they say: fine. but dont be offensive

Ninja Caterpie June 29th, 2008 4:23 AM

Eeveeon, if the border's going to be the white stuff, then you can run into the border at the place with the hole!!

Ah, and Neti, great job.
I could tell you were flared up because your grammar there is absolutely terrible.

Neti June 29th, 2008 3:21 PM

did you mean my grammar? xD thats possible since im no native englsih speaker xD

GiantGroudon June 30th, 2008 6:42 AM

Togepi Paradise - Pokemon Black Doom




Please rate. constructive critism is always welcome.

Neti June 30th, 2008 7:47 AM

i like that big building and the small eggs^^ where did you get the tiles from? or did you make them on your own?
i dislike the gyms roof and that there is a lot of unused space
the shape is cool with me
rating? well caused by all this unused space and so much path on the map: 6/10

Tropical Sunlight July 3rd, 2008 8:05 AM

Map name: Eidolon Forest (not from FF9!)
Original map: Viridian Forest
Map:http://shrani.si/t/R/Tz/3uDCg0ve/eidolon-forest.jpg
Connections: none
Credits: CheesePeow for rombase, me for some palette changing and most importantly, Grosser Block, it helped me to finish this map in 38 minutes 6 seconds

FenderX July 3rd, 2008 7:24 PM

Ok, i made two more maps. Lets go in order shall we?
Ever Green Town (Starting Town) - Here, the player will start out, and the purpose of the other lab at the lower side is that it is a Cloning Lab, where scientist do weird experiments with Pokemon, this area will be reachable after the 5th gym leader has been defeated.



Silver Waters (where you receive your Pokemon and catch the "Sacred Legend") - Here, you will receive you very first Pokemon, (the choices will be out of Trapinch, Dratini, and Bagon) in the upper right cave. The bigger cave on the left side will be the Legendary Pokemon's hideout, and after you exit the cave, there will be a secret place to the very left (thats why you see some stairs to the left end) where you catch the Sacred Legend (after seeing him in the cave, he runs away to the left end). Theres nothing special about the little island..and i guess thats it for this map.



Route 1 - Well, here you will battle against your rival for the first time, and the lake down on the lower left is just so you use surf across to the Cloning Lab.



Ninja Caterpie July 4th, 2008 3:23 AM

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/3263/town1cd7.png
Well, my ROM crashed so I restarted and here's my First Town Take II.

score_under July 4th, 2008 5:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dark lakitu (Post 3726721)
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/3263/town1cd7.png
Well, my ROM crashed so I restarted and here's my First Town Take II.

It's sorta squarish, and looks like you just got the original Pallet Town (which was horribly square :D ) and rearranged it and added a few trees. Also, on the trees in the top-left and top-right there is a tiling error (shadow).
Also, there's a distinct lack of any "activity" in the map - more flowers, small blocks in the route, ledges, some interesting filler for the top-right corner would all be welcome!
5/10

.:God:. July 4th, 2008 12:55 PM

[img=http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/4709/littleroottownliterallyey8.th.png]
Ok, here's my map. It is littleroot town. Over they years, it has split off and shifted across to the region of Deserto (sorta like africa) where it is really hot. Notes:
1= This is where you catch Salamence after the 5th Gym and where you catch Scrought (new desert legendary) after E4.
2= This is Professor Birch 5th lab. The "5th" is because it has been so long since the split off so Birch has died. There were more Birches too.
3= Hero and May 4th's houses. Same drill with May, except May and Brendan had babies.
4= Path to where you catch Ho-Oh. There is a cut tree, a rock and a surf zone so you have to have all 8 badges.

Alucus_Of_Borg July 4th, 2008 2:39 PM

two maps from my upcoming hack white light
the first is the route leading up to the final city

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m225/bitrzo/6copy.gif

and here is the final city

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m225/bitrzo/4.jpg

Megiddo-san July 4th, 2008 7:42 PM

http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view&current=cm.jpg
The empty island at the bottom is where you arrive by a flying vehicle.

Tyrantrum July 4th, 2008 7:44 PM

The map is good, but there r some tile errors...7/10

.:God:. July 5th, 2008 6:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rescue Team Wave (Post 3728007)
[img=http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/4709/littleroottownliterallyey8.th.png]
Ok, here's my map. It is littleroot town. Over they years, it has split off and shifted across to the region of Deserto (sorta like africa) where it is really hot. Notes:
1= This is where you catch Salamence after the 5th Gym and where you catch Scrought (new desert legendary) after E4.
2= This is Professor Birch 5th lab. The "5th" is because it has been so long since the split off so Birch has died. There were more Birches too.
3= Hero and May 4th's houses. Same drill with May, except May and Brendan had babies.
4= Path to where you catch Ho-Oh. There is a cut tree, a rock and a surf zone so you have to have all 8 badges.

Why doesn't anyone ever rate my maps?

Cammy25 July 5th, 2008 12:45 PM

Littleroot town!
 
My littleroot town:

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj7/Cammy-2k8/mapformew_rynandmyhack.jpg

Tyrantrum July 5th, 2008 4:33 PM

The map looks the same, just a bigger place with a few added thing. :\

Working Class Hero July 5th, 2008 5:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rescue Team Wave (Post 3729792)
Why doesn't anyone ever rate my maps?

Ugh -.-

Your map doesn't look very natural. Too many cacti. Those trees shouldn't be there. Trees like that die in deserts. And there are no ledges like that in real deserts. There are only cliffs and sand duns. Ledges like that are weathered away extremely quickly if they do appear. Which the usually don't.

Edit: Now I realize that it is just like the normal LittleRoot Town. Just a new connections and tiles.

0.1 for the tiles. And even those aren't really "wow". Sorry.

Ninja Caterpie July 5th, 2008 6:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cammy25 (Post 3730491)

Three small things.
1. Don't save it in grid mode, hard to look at.
2. It's the exact same as Littleroot but bigger and with grass, a Mart and a rock.
3. You don't REALLY need all those trees at the bottom.

If I gave you a rating, I would cringe...
Spoiler:
0.5 for trying...

WindBlows July 5th, 2008 7:27 PM

Map Name: Sonara Desert
Map of: Pokémon Zephyr
Map:


Rate please and also positive and constructive comments :D

Working Class Hero July 6th, 2008 4:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Twilite Darkrai (Post 3731221)
Map Name: Sonara Desert
Map of: Pokémon Zephyr
Map:


Rate please and also positive and constructive comments :D

I give it a 8 out of 10. It looks very natural. The cliffs look weird to me though. :3

Here is the starting town Navzi Town for my Fire Red hack called Naturo Verde.

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/map.png


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