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Map name: Updated Eidolon Forest
Original map: Viridial Forest Map (Warning! Big map!): Spoiler:
Connections: none Credits: CheesePeow for rombase |
I gotta say, IC, I love the shape, even if is gets square sometimes...
Hang on...why is there moving water in a forest? Oh well... Grass and trees are pretty well placed...but don't you think a forest would be teeming with wild Pokemon? *cough* Ilex Forest *cough* 8.5/10 |
Map Name: Torment Village
Map Game: Ruby Comments: This is the main area for my hacks Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Temporal exploration and Spacial exploration. http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=995&pictureid=5700 |
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Er...sorry if this sounds like flaming, but... Tile error here, tile errors there, tile errors everywhere! And lots of unused land. I suggest you try to put some more things in and stuff... And try to get the tiles right. >.> It's also extremely bland and way too empty to be a major place... Read some mapping tutorials around and...yeah. 2.5/10 just for trying...and originality O.o... |
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What's teeming? |
It means full of...or something like it...xD
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Well, 8/10...xD |
Erm...been a while since i last posted. Since i figured i like Fire Red tiles better than custom ones, I thought I'd make a map...
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/223/mybigmapea2.png It's not completely finished, but i basically finished it. I just got bored of 90 minutes of straight mapping. Comments,crit, and also what more should i add/fix? |
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Sorry, no imagination, lot of tile errors, and... a lot of empty space. Sorry :/ 1/10, like dark lakitu said, just for trying... Read some mapping tutorials... Quote:
Also the waterfall doesn't looks good it should have like a little mountain for make the water fall from there. 7.5/10 Quote:
For a forest it is recomendable to make like a maze to make it more difficult to pass. I like the cave and also the bridge. Cool! 8/10 |
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Vellos Town
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Sorry about the quality... I had to reduce it a lot for it to fit here... (I have no other place to put it, computer is retarded...)
This is Vellos town, a spacious town in the heart of a large valley, the waters unusual currents caused the natural bridges to form above its crystal clear waters! ^_^ This is the first map I ever took seriously, please rate it, and I would like feedback, on how I could improve! (BTW, I made a few of the tiles there, but I suck at tile making, so I only made a few easy ones... If only I knew a good tileset maker...) |
Sorry, but it's too patchy.
Just upload it onto ImageShack and post a link or insert an image (with the button thingo next to hyperlink). Well, I can see a bit...so...I'll rate what I can understand. You say there are "currents" but...the water has NO currents. Eh? Also, if that's a bridge, then it shouldn't be the same level above the water as the ground around... Well, I'll rate it properly once I can see it... But, just a thing. I don't think anyone, be it in the game or real life, would want to have a town with gaps that big between the houses. Sure, it can be spacious, but think literally! PS. About the tiles, from what I can see, they look fine! :) |
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Ahh, I see, I was planning on adding more houses, but I wanted to see what others thought... about the current... it is more under water currents, that wore away all but what is showing above ground... (It ties into a major event in the storyline of the hack I plan to make!) This should work better... hehe it is BIG btw... 1200 X 1200 pixels Spoiler:
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I give it a 5/10 for squigly path and close similarity to petalburg o.o |
Holy shitaki mushrooms!!!!
That's one HUGE map! It's nice...but I don't like what you did to the edges... It's...scarily big...REALLY scarily big. Well, I love the shape of the rocks, musta taken you a little bit of time, eh? There are tile errors in the mountains (sand, see?) Well, the bland empty areas have a lot of stuff that's in them so...yeah... It's so empty near the Mart.... Big maps aren't an awesome idea...they get hard to put things into....so...yah... 6.5/10 |
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Shitaki Mushrooms... hehehe I updated the map, I still havent fixed the sand in the mountains (It is part of the tile, i have to go into tile editor and fix....) EDIT: I fixed the sand in the mountains, and some other small tile problems... I think I made it better... rating? Spoiler:
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The path is supposed to be squiggly because it is slowly decaying away due to the over growth of plant life. You seriously need to look at my thread. So basically the only reason you gave me a bad rating actually should be reasons why it is good. Maps for games do need to follow the story line you know. -_- Compare for yourself everyone! Spoiler:
sPrough93 (8: 20:42 PM): http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/3441161754a5419081841m-1.png sPrough93 (8: 20:47 PM): Do they look alike at all? atomicreactor334 (8:21:20 PM): not in anyway... what so ever sPrough93 (8: 21:27 PM): Thank you sPrough93 (8: 21:34 PM): someone said they looked alike sPrough93 (8: 21:35 PM): -_- atomicreactor334 (8: 21:39 PM): wtf And for your map, I give it a 1.3/10. So SO many map errors. The blue house at the top left has NO windows and it is giant. o.o The map is so empty. Just because it has a lot of stuff that doesn't make it good. You need to make the map smaller. -_- To make this post from being complete spam...here is a new map. :D Spoiler:
Oh, I am sorry. Is it too much like Route 1?! And no, the doduo is NOT on top of the house. -_- |
The map is just simply wonderful, no doubt about it! ^^
Hmm...9/10! ^^ |
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Just...Why is there a RS-able rock behind a TREE? Can you REALLY go behind it? O.o I see. The Doduo is behind the house. People events act on tiles like you do...So yah... Well, I'll give it a 7/10 |
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2. What to you mean RS-able rock? o.O 3. Obviously XD 4. Ok XD Thank you |
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Anywho... here is a better map than my last one... It is also pretty big, but not as big... Spoiler:
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Hey Everyone Can Soemone Rate This Pic. Becareful Its Big
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Bad 1:There is a blue ground beneath those trees, is it a tile error, or are you trying to do that? EDIT: Ok, there are a few more tile error than I expected, there is a missing block in the tree along the right edge of the map, as well as that along that same edge, the large, bright green trees have no ending tiles, eg. follow from the top of the screen down along right edge of bright green large trees, and there is no ending tiles... 2:The borders may end up a little funky, try using one type of tree for your level edges, that way, the borders blend in with them. Good 1: I personally like the maze quality, I don't see to many maze like maps in pokemon games... other than berry forest in FR, but that was an easy maze... 2: I like the placement of the hop-able cliffs, but try to tone them down a bit, there are a lot of them, hehe! 3: Caves are good, and bad... there is something about the cave at the top that bothers me... like, the mountain like thing it is on is too square.... I give it a professional score of 5/10 I give it a personal score of 7.5/10! (after tile edits of course) Keep it up! |
Haven't made a map in a while! :P:P:P:P:P:P:P
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/ov.jpg |
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No need to be sarcastic and personally attack him. This isn't a place to defend yourself, you post maps to have them criticised. If you can't take it, then don't post them. :] And we both know, that map doesn't deserve a 1.3. The map isn't the best, it has many flaws and the layout strange, but not 1.3. I'd give it a 4/10. Now, I'm not attacking him right now. He was just the last person to do it. This is for everyone. If you post a map here, expect to be criticized. Do not take it personally and attack the other person or make it seem like you are. You don't need to defend yourself. Let people have their opinions. <3 αωαταρ αανγ (sorry. I'm just using you. <3) EDIT: Haha, and. No. I don't think it looks like Petalburg City, if anything, the other one looks more like Petalburg City, but neither do. As for a rating, i'd give "Petalburg City" a 7/10. It's nice. I just hate the placement and shape of the lake. Also, lacks alot of creativity. Looks like an average town. Which can be good. In fact, almost necessary in a pokemon game. But I still wish it had a few "WOAH! Cool!" surprises in there |
my first ever map put on to this thread well hope you like it
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route1.jpg?t=1215955244 |
@riolu 9: The map is great. It's not too square, enough space, good vegetation, and a cave! ^^
Of course the cave could be a little more realistic...9/10 This map is actually by my friend. I made one for him because he's new to hacking. I'm posting it because he 4got his password. http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m392/nickimon5000_PC/nick.jpg Plz rate and comment. |
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