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Tyrantrum July 23rd, 2008 6:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mew_Ryn (Post 3788681)
Hiya! i've got a map i've been working on here...
what do u people think 'bout it?

Map Name: Frotus Town
Hack: Legend of Hatichu
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://i34.*.com/ir2hkx.jpg

The shape looks good to me, but it's a tiny bit empty at the bottom, and that Rom Base is over used...8/10

tImE July 24th, 2008 12:56 AM

Hi, I've been
working on a Desert Town
for some time now and I thought I ought to post it
and see what people thinks of it.

Map Name: Subaku Town
Hack: Pokemon Nature Force (Not posted on PC yet)
Game: Firered BPRE Sorry xP Ruby AXVE
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5898/subakutowncn4.png

BlackRainbow* July 24th, 2008 1:00 AM

44tim44 i really like your map. it has a nice layout and really awesome tiles. maybe you should put some more trees in it?
8/10

.Iramet July 24th, 2008 5:25 AM

44tim44 that is a really good map i wish i could do somthing like that i would give it a 9/10 only because nothing is ever perfect
@blackrainbow-thnks for telling me and ill just use the ones atr whack a hack cuz they already give you permission as long as you give the creator credit for the tiles

Tyrantrum July 24th, 2008 4:29 PM

@44tim44: It's a good map, the tiles r excellent, just add a few more holes and rocks...8.5/10

Luck July 24th, 2008 4:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 44tim44 (Post 3789316)
Hi, I've been
working on a Desert Town
for some time now and I thought I ought to post it
and see what people thinks of it.

Map Name: Subaku Town
Hack: Pokemon Nature Force (Not posted on PC yet)
Game: Firered BPRE Sorry xP Ruby AXVE
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5898/subakutowncn4.png

Its okay but can be much better.
The town is too bunched up and gets too empty.
there are no rocks in the water, it seems really dull, the top of the mountain tiles seem weird,and the mountain placement just doesn't look that good.
there isn't much to expect from a desert town but it could still be better.
6.8/10 for emptiness.

Edit: I know no one ever reads the page before the last page, so i'll put my previous maps on here.



Mr.Fury July 24th, 2008 6:36 PM

i really like your map, nice simple with great tiles. 9/10 ^_^

*edit* didnt feel like double posting, so ill post my map here.

Name: Sequil Village (iunno were it came from, just liked it)
ROM: Fire Red
Original: Pallet Town

Please rate and comment 1-10
And keep in mind this is my first succesful map i have made, just for fun.

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/2892/sequilvillagexj9.th.png



Also i am possibly looking for a tutor/mentor for hacking. ^_^

Netdot5 July 24th, 2008 8:02 PM

On the map, the ends of the path are kinda not so good. Make sure you are using the right tiles that make it flow. You need to find the connecter for the vertical and horizontal paths. Right now, they are just clashing together.

Austinia July 24th, 2008 8:19 PM

I have to say I am pretty happy with this city I just made... it took forever making the palettes and inserting the tiles but here it is!


http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/SitruaCity.png

Sitrua City

from my Pokemon hack (Oak's Murder)

Tyrantrum July 24th, 2008 8:23 PM

I simply love the placement of everything, especially the trees! :D
Very good...9.5/10

Likewise July 24th, 2008 8:27 PM

okay this is the first map of my hack pokemon deep blue/transform

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7205/waterfalltownyj6.th.png
yes i know that there are some errors this is just a rough copy of it
please rate!

Lollypop July 25th, 2008 4:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by behbod55 (Post 3790546)
okay this is the first map of my hack pokemon deep blue/transform

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7205/waterfalltownyj6.th.png
yes i know that there are some errors this is just a rough copy of it
please rate!

With errors 4/10
Without caring about errors 8/10.

I like the shape of the map. The shape is pretty good too.

Ninja Caterpie July 25th, 2008 4:24 AM

Dude, don't post unfinished maps. Ya know, half of the points are for how the map actually is...
2/10 because you're lazy.

_____________________
Now, this is my map. It's a peninsula...
Oh, by the way, that grass has something special so...yeah.
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2352/peninsulavy8.png

.Iramet July 25th, 2008 5:44 AM

1 Attachment(s)
name: the final gym leaders house
game:ruby
comments:if i make a hack this will be in it
thanks to vincent for inserting the tiles ^_^

Mr.Fury July 25th, 2008 5:53 AM

Thank you for the help...I will try to find them.
I made another map, it took a while, i like the outcome, but seeing as this is my second map, im not an expert.
Please rate 1-10 and add constructive critiscm. ^_^

Name: Edmond's Crossing (*shrugs*)
ROM: FireRed
Orginal: The water below pallet town, forgot what the route is called.

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/7937/edmondscrossinggm7.th.png

.Iramet July 25th, 2008 7:39 AM

1 Attachment(s)
sorry for posting it twice i didnt think the first one worked

Netdot5 July 25th, 2008 9:05 AM

Rating: 6/10
Reason: I like it, Mr.Fury. The way that everything flows on your map. I just don't like how the 2-story house looks. That may just be me, though. Everything else is good, though.
Suggestions: So, just find a way to fix that house. Oh, and when going on that ladder/stairway up the rock the one stairway that is more of at the top of the rock doesn't look so good.

Rating: 4/10
Reason: It just looks boring, emoakt. It's not good to leave empty grass in some places.
Suggestions: Maybe add some flowers or trees or something in some of those empty spaces.

Map Name: Rodiok Island
Game: Fire Red
Comments: This is my second try at making this map. This time I started from scratch, so I could get it too look like the sketch I made. The island revolves around that little PoKeFarm right there.

.Iramet July 25th, 2008 9:58 AM

thanks for the comments ill do that netdot5 and i think your map is 6.5/10
because there is a mis map with the fence in back of the two doored house?
and you could probably get rid of one of the docks.
^_^
also the ridges are kinda weird lookin lined up like that

Mr.Fury July 25th, 2008 10:10 AM

Thank you for the help!
I really didnt like the house either so im gonna fill that space with trees and stuff, but i will leave the pokecenter and mart...and im not sure what you are talking about with the mountain.
When i am finished i will post another pic, but with sprites ^_^

@ your map.
7/10 I really like the flow of it, but it seems to big and there is a lot of open space, so perhaps fill it with more stuff or just make it smaller, and maybe a little less square. other than that its really good.

.Iramet July 25th, 2008 10:30 AM

1 Attachment(s)
I edited the colors and i added a few things please rate ^_^
i also changed the sprites a bit

Austinia July 25th, 2008 10:32 AM

I give it an 7.7/10 :) (emoakt)

Mr.Fury July 25th, 2008 11:41 AM

Hello again fellas!
I have edited my two maps to my liking, hope they are to yours as well.
1-10 please. :D

Name: Sequil Village
Rom: Fire Red
Original: Pallet Town
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9477/sequilvillagetx6.th.png

Name: Edmond's Crossing
Rom: Fire Red
Original: Ocean bellow Pallet Town
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8738/edmondscrossingkz9.th.png

Austinia July 25th, 2008 11:08 PM

http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/8320/route410ff1.png

Route 409 for my hack ^_~ tell me your opinions!

Tyrantrum July 25th, 2008 11:17 PM

I love the shape! :D
The only problem is, that when u jump down on certain parts, u will jump down on top of the ledges...9/10

Ninja Caterpie July 26th, 2008 12:39 AM

Nah, he can set it so it won't jump.

Anyway, here's another mappy!
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8333/deisaxv9.png


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