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Hi, I've been
working on a Desert Town for some time now and I thought I ought to post it and see what people thinks of it. Map Name: Subaku Town Hack: Pokemon Nature Force (Not posted on PC yet) Game: Firered BPRE Sorry xP Ruby AXVE http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5898/subakutowncn4.png |
44tim44 i really like your map. it has a nice layout and really awesome tiles. maybe you should put some more trees in it?
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44tim44 that is a really good map i wish i could do somthing like that i would give it a 9/10 only because nothing is ever perfect
@blackrainbow-thnks for telling me and ill just use the ones atr whack a hack cuz they already give you permission as long as you give the creator credit for the tiles |
@44tim44: It's a good map, the tiles r excellent, just add a few more holes and rocks...8.5/10
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The town is too bunched up and gets too empty. there are no rocks in the water, it seems really dull, the top of the mountain tiles seem weird,and the mountain placement just doesn't look that good. there isn't much to expect from a desert town but it could still be better. 6.8/10 for emptiness. Edit: I know no one ever reads the page before the last page, so i'll put my previous maps on here. Spoiler:
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i really like your map, nice simple with great tiles. 9/10 ^_^
*edit* didnt feel like double posting, so ill post my map here. Name: Sequil Village (iunno were it came from, just liked it) ROM: Fire Red Original: Pallet Town Please rate and comment 1-10 And keep in mind this is my first succesful map i have made, just for fun. http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/2892/sequilvillagexj9.th.png Also i am possibly looking for a tutor/mentor for hacking. ^_^ |
On the map, the ends of the path are kinda not so good. Make sure you are using the right tiles that make it flow. You need to find the connecter for the vertical and horizontal paths. Right now, they are just clashing together.
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I have to say I am pretty happy with this city I just made... it took forever making the palettes and inserting the tiles but here it is!
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/SitruaCity.png Sitrua City from my Pokemon hack (Oak's Murder) |
I simply love the placement of everything, especially the trees! :D
Very good...9.5/10 |
okay this is the first map of my hack pokemon deep blue/transform
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7205/waterfalltownyj6.th.png yes i know that there are some errors this is just a rough copy of it please rate! |
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Without caring about errors 8/10. I like the shape of the map. The shape is pretty good too. |
Dude, don't post unfinished maps. Ya know, half of the points are for how the map actually is...
2/10 because you're lazy. _____________________ Now, this is my map. It's a peninsula... Oh, by the way, that grass has something special so...yeah. http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2352/peninsulavy8.png |
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name: the final gym leaders house
game:ruby comments:if i make a hack this will be in it thanks to vincent for inserting the tiles ^_^ |
Thank you for the help...I will try to find them.
I made another map, it took a while, i like the outcome, but seeing as this is my second map, im not an expert. Please rate 1-10 and add constructive critiscm. ^_^ Name: Edmond's Crossing (*shrugs*) ROM: FireRed Orginal: The water below pallet town, forgot what the route is called. http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/7937/edmondscrossinggm7.th.png |
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sorry for posting it twice i didnt think the first one worked
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Rating: 6/10
Reason: I like it, Mr.Fury. The way that everything flows on your map. I just don't like how the 2-story house looks. That may just be me, though. Everything else is good, though. Suggestions: So, just find a way to fix that house. Oh, and when going on that ladder/stairway up the rock the one stairway that is more of at the top of the rock doesn't look so good. Rating: 4/10 Reason: It just looks boring, emoakt. It's not good to leave empty grass in some places. Suggestions: Maybe add some flowers or trees or something in some of those empty spaces. Map Name: Rodiok Island Game: Fire Red Comments: This is my second try at making this map. This time I started from scratch, so I could get it too look like the sketch I made. The island revolves around that little PoKeFarm right there. Spoiler:
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thanks for the comments ill do that netdot5 and i think your map is 6.5/10
because there is a mis map with the fence in back of the two doored house? and you could probably get rid of one of the docks. ^_^ also the ridges are kinda weird lookin lined up like that |
Thank you for the help!
I really didnt like the house either so im gonna fill that space with trees and stuff, but i will leave the pokecenter and mart...and im not sure what you are talking about with the mountain. When i am finished i will post another pic, but with sprites ^_^ @ your map. 7/10 I really like the flow of it, but it seems to big and there is a lot of open space, so perhaps fill it with more stuff or just make it smaller, and maybe a little less square. other than that its really good. |
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I edited the colors and i added a few things please rate ^_^
i also changed the sprites a bit |
I give it an 7.7/10 :) (emoakt)
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Hello again fellas!
I have edited my two maps to my liking, hope they are to yours as well. 1-10 please. :D Name: Sequil Village Rom: Fire Red Original: Pallet Town http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9477/sequilvillagetx6.th.png Name: Edmond's Crossing Rom: Fire Red Original: Ocean bellow Pallet Town http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8738/edmondscrossingkz9.th.png |
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/8320/route410ff1.png
Route 409 for my hack ^_~ tell me your opinions! |
I love the shape! :D
The only problem is, that when u jump down on certain parts, u will jump down on top of the ledges...9/10 |
Nah, he can set it so it won't jump.
Anyway, here's another mappy! http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8333/deisaxv9.png |
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