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Rayquaza Boy
Chapter 1 : The Chosen One
It was one stormy night in a town called Rainbow Town in a region called Kainen, far away from Kanto, Jhoto or Honen. There was a house located just beside a lake called the Lake of Mirage. A baby was about to be born in the house and the voice of a woman having labour can be heard. Soon, there was a loud cry of a baby and all of sudden, a lightning struk on the house, burning it vigorously. The villagers started to crowd around the burning house, trying to put off the fire. Fortunately, the family could be saved from the house and the baby was also saved. However, the villagers were shocked when they saw a strange mark on the baby's arm - a mark resembling the shape of a dragon - which looked like the shape of the legendary pokemon which is believed to be the protector of the town, Rayquaza. The town people then decided to name him RYU. (Means dragon in Japanese) Chapter 2 : The Legend A legend says that long time ago, the town was under attack by Vigoroths and it was at the edge of destruction. Many town people were executed under the order of the leader, Slaking. Each day, the people were forced to work under the sun and rain, day or night, non-stop. One day, the sky suddenly turned dark and there were lightnings everywhere. Then, it started to rain. The Slaking ordered his slaves to keep on working despite the heavy rain and the lightnings. Suddenly, there was a loud roar from the distant sky. Then, everything turned bright and there was a large figure in front of them. Then, lightning struck, revealing the identity of the dark figure in fromt of them. It was a Rayquaza and with his Hyper Beam, it hit a nerby mountain, destroying it. It scared away the monkeys and they ran away from the town. Rayquaza then left after doing his job. The overjoyed town people decided to honour the pokemon by holding a festival anually by painting everything green. The festival is now still held in the Rainbow Town to thank the pokemon that saved their ancestors. Chapter 3 : A Beginning of a Journey Many years later after the incident, it was just like an ordinary day in Rainbow Town. Many people in the town was doing their daily job and there was many children playing around in a open field at the middle of the town. On a house beside the Lake of Mirage, Ryu was helping his mother, hanging the laundry. His dad was fixing the roof of his house. RYU : Mom, what are you going to give me for my 15th birthday tommorow? MOTHER : It's a secret, my dear. I want to make this years birthday to be full of surprise! RYU : Can you give me a clue mom? MOTHER : If I tell you now, you will not be very excited on the day. Just be patient, dear. Why don't you prepare the table for our lunch? RYU : *sigh* Ok, mom... After the conversation, Ryu was left thinking all night and no matter how hard he tried, he just could not figure out what it is. And finally, the day came. There were many of his friends came to his house to celebrate the birthday. Ryu was excited to see so many people in his house. He was also excited because he finally can have a chance to see what his parents gave to him. MOTHER : Happy birthday, dear! FATHER : Happy birthday, son! RYU : Thanks, mom. Thanks, dad. Gee... what have you got there? Is it my present? Ryu was a bit disappointed when he saw his present. It was a small box, the size of a tennis ball. RYU : Are you sure this is my present, mom? MOTHER : Hurry up and open it. I bet you will be happy! Ryu then slowly open the box. When he saw what was inside, he suddenly shouted happily and began to jump aroudn the house. It was a pokeball containig a pokemon. RYU : Awesome....! A pokemon for myself! Thanks, mom and dad. I love you both! DAD : Don't you wanna know what pokemon is inside? Go outside and check it out. Ryu then went to his garden. His friends followed him. Ryu then threw his pokeball on the ground. RYU : Cool! A charmander! CHARMANDER : Char? RYU : Hey Charmander! How do you do? My name is Ryu and I am your owner now! CHARMANDER : Char! RYU : Hahaha! After everybody left, his parents then appeared in front of Ryu. However, there was a sad expression on their face. MOTHER : *sob* I think it is time for us to tell you something very importnat. RYU : ? DAD : Son, do you remember the legend about our protector, Rayquaza? RYU : Yea... He saved us from the danger, didn't he? What's the problem? MOTHER : Well, have you ever wondered what the mark on your right arm meant? RYU : It's just an ordinary birthmark, I suppose.... Can you tell me what's going on? DAD : Son, the time has come for you to leave this town to have a journey for your own, with your pokemon. RYU : What are you talking about? I don't understand. DAD : Do you remember the story about a baby who was struck by a lightning and survived? RYU : Yea.... DAD : You might be surprised but the baby is actually my son. RYU : What? I AM THE BABY? MOM : The mark on your arm means that you are the one chosen to carry on the task of our protector, the mighty Rayquaza, to protect the world from the danger, like how he protected us. RYU : ....... :shocked: DAD : The legend tells us that on the 15th birthday of the chosen one, a pokemon should be given to accompany his journey to save the world from the conflict between the different elements MOTHER : As you might have heard from the news, there is a disaster going on at the other regions, Kanto Jhoto and Honen. In each region there are fierce battle between legendary pokemons. In Kanto, Articuno, Zapdos and Moltres are fighting each other to gain more territory for themselves. As a result, the region is in chaos and the people there are suffering. In Jhoto, Suicune, Entei and Raikou are also doing the same thing and in Honen, Groudon and Kyogre have recently been revived by the two gangs, the Aquas and Magmas. This is causing the destruction of this world and someone need to save the world from the destruction. Do you understand now, RYU? RYU : I got it mom. Now I realise that as a chosen one, I have a very important responsibility for the world and if I don't hurry, it might be too late. DAD : That's my boy.... *sob* MOTHER : Thank you for understanding us. We too feel sad about having to be apart with you. But this is a task that has been given to you. You must be brave to face the challenges that you will be facing. DAD : Let's now go in and prepare for you journey, Ryu. It's almost dark so we better be hurry. That night, the family spend their last moment togeather and RYU is all fired up to begin his jouney to save the world. + TO BE CONTINUED + :dead: |
write some more plz this is exiting WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!
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You should add more detail
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it has a nice plot. The story is very nice thought of but those 3 chapters could have been but in 1 chapter.
And the chapter 3, is in script form which isn't fun to read. Just make it dialogue and add more description. if you work on that it will become an extremely good fic. Just work on length, description and the non-script thing. Hope to see the next chap soon !! |
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