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Old January 2nd, 2006 (11:07 PM).
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Kyaru-san Kyaru-san is offline
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    Join Date: Nov 2004
    Location: Where You Think Get Out Of My Sight
    Age: 28
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    Nature: Timid
    Posts: 273
    I agree with Eikichi-kun,
    First off you need to plan your Story better
    2. Show some screen
    3. Noone can't steal storyline here that'll be pointless
    4. goto http://picceta.1.forumer.com/ they help you out
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