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Old July 31st, 2007 (11:15 AM).
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    I think switches within a chapter are more than a bit much . While you can show all the sides to a story that way it is sometimes alot better to have a limited pov and not give away the whole story though the reader knowing so many things the 'main' character does not. It takes away a lot of the joy in figuring things out yourself IMHO :\
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