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Old August 12th, 2007 (8:39 AM).
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Careful With That Axe, Pichu! Careful With That Axe, Pichu! is offline
     
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    There's no excuse, you could have asked me to change the title. Please don't do that again.

    I'm asumming then the previous topic isn't needed anymore...

    Without ppinting out some details I must say I like the way you narrate and the choice of words throught these two chapters. Don't rush the plot too much as you've apparently got what it takes to deepen the character's personalities and the narrative.
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