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Old September 16th, 2007 (5:34 PM). Edited September 16th, 2007 by Grovyle42(Griff8416).
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Originally Posted by Glajummy View Post
Aww, I kinda feel bad for Jeff... But he needs to suck it up and be a man! The descriptions were better in this chapter but unless Jeff is spending a little more time in Petalburg, you should decribe the city a little more. Also, you forgot to describe Alan's clothes (I think). Overall, though, it was a great chapter. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see when Jeff and Alan meet again!
Oh didn't I mention that Alan was a nudist (J/K!) Yeah, that was my fault. You'll see the after effects from the event next chapter (obviously )

Originally Posted by Eternal Smasher View Post
Wow, big events here.

Mainly, the chapter seemed a bit like "Odd Pokemon Out", except with humans.

I felt really bad for Jeff, he must've had a hard time there.
Are Jeff and Kristie going to meet again later in the story?
Yeah, this will be significant later on. And yes, The two will be meeting later on, other wise that would be a cheap way to get rid of a character

Originally Posted by Eternal Smasher View Post
I also noticed that the small relationship between Corpish and Treecko reminds me of the anime. *cough*

I was worried about using Corphish and Treecko and ____, because I knew that they were both Ash's pokemon in the show. I didn't start watching advanced gen until the middle of the Advanced Battle season, so I wasn't aware of much of a relationship between them. :/ Is the relationship between them friendly or kind of pissed off at each other? Because I'm going for them being pissed off at each other at this point. I didn't even watch "Tree's a Crowd" yet (Le gasp! Don't shoot me during one of our Treecko club meetings, please )
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