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Old September 25th, 2007 (2:41 PM).
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Originally Posted by GrovyleMan View Post
I decided to take a look, and my, what an interesting story!
Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

Originally Posted by Glajummy View Post
First of all, I'm angry that this chapter is so similar to me next one >.> I wanted to take my anger out on the review, but the beta-reading was too good. Nice job, both of you.

I recently learned that eyes don't actually "bleed", they just excrete liquid. This isn't a real mistake because a "bloody eye" is a common term.

Haha... I love Corphish. Can't wait to see his personality after evolution.

"a" became "A"... I think that's right.

You forgot to press enter twice here.
Well thanks for not taking it out on the review xD.
I'm sure that your next chapter will dwarf this one, so I hope you don't go out of your way to change it. I'm excited to see how its simalar.

As for the eye thing, I didn't want to go into TOO much detail xD thats my defense.

I also like Corphish, he's very fun to write.
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