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Old November 20th, 2007 (2:43 PM).
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    Originally Posted by KPROFSLS View Post
    well this is cool but i think you can do better.
    Sorry, but that's close to spam here. I'll give you a chance to edit your post with more words of advice that Bay can use to improve her fic. Tell her what she can do better, okay? If you just keep on reviewing here with posts that can hold true in every story on this board (you don't give specific examples from the story that shows what is good and what isn't) then that's not a nice way to the writers here to raise your post count.

    Hey, uh, Bay, sorry to take over your thread like that. I'll give you a review at some point. *scritches head* Hopefully before chapter three.
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