A Midsummer Knight's Dream (R)
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December 17th, 2007 (11:02 AM).
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Ooh. Thanks for the corrections. I'm not sure how I managed to miss some of them, particularly the last one. You're right. It
sound awkward. O_o
Also, thanks for the review in general. I'm a little tempted to use the freaky split-personality idea (because, really, that sounds so cool), but alas, I've already got a plan for this.
And as a couple of side notes...
Sorry it took so long to get this posted, I've been terribly lazy with my reviews lately. xP
I'll never be able to forgive you. XD
I mean, uh, it's okay! We all get lazy sometimes! >.> <.<
Aaargh! It's still so short! *Flail* You need to make some mistakes so I can pick up on them and pad my review. >O
In that case, my next chapter will be in chat and l33t-speak.
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