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Old June 27th, 2008 (5:25 PM).
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Originally Posted by txteclipse View Post
Alright, here goes. First of all, you can edit your first chapter post: you don't need to re-post it. Just hit the "edit" button at the bottom of the post and make your changes.

Capitalize last names, and I would very highly recommend changing Darrens. You probably didn't mean to do what I'm seeing, but I'm reading "a whore" when I see that last name.
I didn't remember the edit bit, that was my fault, but about the name, read the revision.
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