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Old July 20th, 2008 (9:31 PM).
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Wow, are you sure you're an amateur? That was really nice.
I'm guessing that you don't live in the United States, right? If so, I really like the use of your slant rhyming in meter one.
(I say this because pain and again don't rhyme in US English. )
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