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Old October 3rd, 2008 (5:00 AM).
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    Overall it was an incredibly interesting concept; bad luck only befalling him because he believed he truly was an omen, which was a tragic irony.

    More so, I like how you portrayed the humans, making them seem truly horrible, it makes me feel bad for ever capturing wild Pokémon on the games now. There's a whole story behind every Pokémon that's been ripped from their homes and loved ones.

    Kudos, I really liked it.
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