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Old November 12th, 2008 (9:30 PM).
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    *Blink, blink* My post disappeared.
    Oh well, back to the drawing board...

    I finished read both of your new chapters. I am glad to say I saw no errors - grammatical, spelling, or otherwise.

    It took me a couple seconds to fully understand the name "Phillar Caractor" but I was glad when I did. Nice to be able to chuckle at the staged stupidity of a "phillar" character. I love how your work always has so much humor fit into it.

    One thing you mentioned before seemed very true - Rui isn't much smarter than Johnson(but she isn't as annoying)

    Glad you managed to write something after a long break
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