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Old November 13th, 2008 (11:59 PM).
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    Join Date: Sep 2007
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    Nice update. I spy two errors, though~
    I think there should be an exclamation mark, or at least a comma, after "Hey boss". Or better still, change it to just "Boss!".
    Also, there's a tile error with the spikes on the right side of the building.
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