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Old November 18th, 2008 (6:41 PM).
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Join Date: Jun 2008
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Your mapping needs some work. Big, empty spaces = no-no. And route 1 is basically a square map. I dislike the no capitals in the storyline, because I am a grammar freak and it bugs me.
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