Thread: Many the Miles
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Old January 19th, 2009 (5:59 PM).
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    First off, I really like the format of this story. It makes it so much easier to read than other stories.

    You have really nice description in the first two chapters, and I love how you have ended both chapters.

    Poor Danny has such low self esteem! But I'm looking forward to how he'll develop.

    Hehe, I can imagine Nurse Joy being a tad overworked in Viridian.

    I'd like to see some more plot, but I'm not worried cuz it's only chapter 2!
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