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Old February 25th, 2009 (4:33 AM).
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Cool! A Dante production!

Anyway, most of the grammar in the Pics are OK,
but I spy very little grammar mistakes in Pic 9, Pic 16 and Pic 19.

Pic 9: It should be: Hey you! Stop right there! That is my backpack!
Pic 16: It should be: Now you can't escape from me anymore!
Pic 19: It should be: Hey Landon! Have you brought my bag?
I am now an anime dubber, cover singer and a fan of anime. I can still apply as a translator and grammar corrector, though.