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Old February 25th, 2009 (4:33 AM).
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    Cool! A Dante production!

    Anyway, most of the grammar in the Pics are OK,
    but I spy very little grammar mistakes in Pic 9, Pic 16 and Pic 19.

    Pic 9: It should be: Hey you! Stop right there! That is my backpack!
    Pic 16: It should be: Now you can't escape from me anymore!
    Pic 19: It should be: Hey Landon! Have you brought my bag?
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