Thread: [Pokémon] Mentor (PG-14)
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Old March 3rd, 2009 (5:37 PM).
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    I can’t really answer any question about ‘That Week’, but I have to say, you’re pretty close. Though, I’ll tell you right now, Leah’s parents aren’t involved in what happened in any way, shape or form.

    About Ally, you’re probably right about her being oddly reserved. I’ve never really interacted with a ten-year-old kid before so I have to no clue if I’m characterizing the kids right. Thanks for pointing it out, I’m going to see if I can fix it a bit and make her more kid-ish.

    Thanks for the review, Giratinasaur! I really appreciate it.
    "After being saddled with two ten-year-old brats and being sent out on her long overdue Pokemon journey, she can’t help but wonder… is it worth it?"
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