Thread: [Pokémon] Mentor (PG-14)
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Old April 4th, 2009 (6:24 AM).
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Originally Posted by Dagzar View Post
Sighing, she took out Sands' Pokeball from her pocket and held it up to her face.
This was another good chapter. I really liked the creepiness factor you added to it, and the only error I could find was the one quoted. When a name ends with an S (Alexis, Sands, Helios, and so on) you use the last letter as if it were the second part of the 's and put an apostrophe at the end of the word. ;D
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