Thread: [Pokémon] Mentor (PG-14)
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Old April 4th, 2009 (7:38 PM). Edited April 5th, 2009 by Dagzar.
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Thanks for the grammar advice, Buoysel! Since I’ve substituted ‘laying’ for ‘lying’ several times throughout the story, I better go back and do some much need editing!

And thanks, delongbi! I’ll have to correct those errors when I go back to fix my ‘laying’ problem. Heh, and don’t worry, this story isn’t a horror one (though it may seem like it at times). Though, I suppose I’ll say that the next chapter will have some creepiness, but then the story should go back to its generalness. Somewhat.
"After being saddled with two ten-year-old brats and being sent out on her long overdue Pokemon journey, she can’t help but wonder… is it worth it?"
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