Thread: [Pokémon] Mentor (PG-14)
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Old May 10th, 2009 (8:59 PM).
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Hey, delongbi, thanks for reviewing and catching that mistake.

Anywho, I just got caught up. Nice chapters. The battle with the gym leader seemed very practical. Actually, your take on Pokemon is a very practical one in general. All of this seems like it could actually happen if there were really Pokemon in the world so good job.
Heh, I strive for realism. Who need flashy battles when they can be won by much simpler methods? (Though I admit, the flashy battles are always the ones that are much more fun to write. <_<)

Haha, Leah got thrown off a boat. =)

Ooh, and I liked Leah's background story. Can't wait to find out more about her!
Yeah, my poor characters. And their bad luck is only just starting. I’m glad you liked Leah’s back-story and maybe more of her past will pop up again some time soon.

Thanks again!
"After being saddled with two ten-year-old brats and being sent out on her long overdue Pokemon journey, she can’t help but wonder… is it worth it?"
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