Thread: [Idea] Pokemon Plasma Blue
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Old May 31st, 2009 (9:25 AM).
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    Umm, seeing as this is the plot section, you didn't really give a lot of plot, but I'll try to comment on what I see. First off, before you get hit by the time beam, what makes your game special, besides fakemon (are there fakemon)? What will be appealing about getting through that region? Second, what causes the time beam? And if it sends you back in time, why are you in a new region? Shouldn't you just be in an old version of the first region? And what is special about the second region?

    Those were my questions reading it. Good luck!
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