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Old June 7th, 2009 (10:01 AM).
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    *shivers* Fantastic. Superb peace of writing. You have a natural talent. I can only hope to be as good of a writer as you one day.

    Only thing i would say is ni agree with Neo Groudon. That part was a little repetitive, but absolutely fantastic.
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