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Old June 19th, 2009 (2:18 PM).
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    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex8-31.png
    I like this one, though the spikes on the tail don't really look right... Maybe they have too dark of an outline?


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex9-14.png
    These...are a little scary The magkid is actually really good, props to you on that one, Elactamar's head is a little...off, I don't know how to explain it, Just about everything on Electimortar is bad, no offense, but the stripes just don't look right, the arms don't look like they're in a natural position, the shading is a little weird, and those round antennae things look 2D.


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-26.png
    This one would look better if it didn't have those hands, IMO. Better than anything I could do, though

    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex1-46.png
    I don't really like this one at all, it all looks 2D except for the head.

    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex2-28.png
    Best sprite so far, I don't see anything wrong with it at first glance


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex7-15.png
    This one...creeps me out. It looks kinda flat and the arms are completely different sizes.

    -sorry about color.
    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex8-21.png
    This one is way too busy. The color is fine, but there's way too much stuff on it


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex8-19.png
    There's really nothing wrong with this, other than the fact that it looks a little weird


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex8-18.png
    I love this one, though I see a few minor outlining issues


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-22.png
    Again, a little too busy, and the shading on the main body doesn't look very natural


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-19.png
    I've seen worrse, though, again, the shading doesn't look very natural. Don't try so hard to get it right.


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex5-16.png
    ...


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex3-18.jpg
    What is it, exactly?


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex3-19.jpg
    No, just...no

    -this one is AWESOME.
    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...is/alex8-9.jpg
    It is pretty cool, though the arms look like they'd fall off at any moment


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex4-17.jpg
    I really don't know what to say about this...

    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-14.jpg
    This one looks really bad, and it is way too short.


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex5-15.jpg
    This is why you never interrupt a ditto when it is transforming...


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex2-24.jpg
    Not TERRRIBLE, but not amazing either. Very cute though, not much else to say...


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...is/alex8-8.jpg
    No comment


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-13.jpg
    I absolutely love this on, I don't see anything wrong with it


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex4-16.jpg
    Another shading issue, and don't use that much dithering

    -still ghost and flying lol.
    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex10-6.jpg
    A little bland, but that cloud is really annoying me. Go with a lighter outline.

    -it's... A roboooot(Spongebob episode "Krab Borg")
    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...is/alex8-7.jpg
    The outline on this one doesn't really look right...

    -Nyoxys! Dun dun dun! It will kill you! ..........................It stinks, I know...
    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...is/alex8-6.png
    This one seriously burns my eyes, tone it down a little, please

    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex2-17.jpg
    The neck on this one looks like...well...it looks like the bones are bigger around than everything else in the neck

    -12 pokemon fusion! Woo!
    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex3-14.jpg
    Stick with simple fusions for now...


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex7-10.jpg
    It's...cute?


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex1-23.jpg
    This gets another no


    http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex2-15.jpg
    [b]This really creeps me out. It prbably wouldn't even happen in the Pokemon world
    Comments in the spoiler. I couldn't be bothered to comment on all of them, but the overall look for these is work on your shading and anatomy.
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