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Old July 23rd, 2009 (3:24 PM).
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Relith Relith is offline
     
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    Usually I'll describe objects better than the people. Like...for instance

    The ghostly moon approaches the abandoned castle.

    Most times I forget to describe what the characters are doing.
    I gotta remember to take my time, lol
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