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Old August 25th, 2009 (11:04 AM).
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    Thank you for the review, actually Chapter One delves more into the plot. And in my fan-fiction Archie and Cyrus have come to form an alliance with Giovanni which is explained in Chapter Two which is being written.
    I hope the explanation is a good one. I'm interested to see how the logic plays out. [whips out lawn chair]

    In my fan-fiction, everyone is more human and has more realistic goals and motives for them, more will be explained in Chapter Two.
    That's not an excuse for being out of character, unfortunately. Once again, the logic boggles my mind.


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