Thread: [Pokémon] Spring's Revenge
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Old February 28th, 2010 (12:30 AM).
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    This last part of chapter 5 was as always well-written, and it certainly serves the story well. It makes perfect sense, I like where it's going. I especially like that Cynthia's planning something evil. Unfortunately there wasn't enough of her in this part.

    I wasn't too big of a fan of "nice" Karen, and I was even less of a fan of raging Sabrina. Sabrina of all people would be someone who could control her emotions, and take revenge in a more subtle way. But here she comes off as really mean. I don't like Sabrina as a tsundere. That's just not her character.

    Anyway, very much looking forward to the next chapter, where maybe that Espeon Will caught will end up paying dividends for him...