Thread: Pokemon Impact
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Old October 25th, 2004 (5:38 AM). Edited December 1st, 2004 by Legendary Trainer.
Brian Powell Brian Powell is offline
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    This is the Re-written of my previous fanfiction, Pokemon Xtreme. I hope that this is better.

    This fanfic is rated PG.

    Episode 1: Black Jacks here

    Chapter 1:

    There were two brothers walking their way from school. One of them was called Jack and another was called John. They were both born on the same day, making them twins and they were both living in Dark City of the Kanto region. Both of them have a pokemon, Larvitar, each. As they got near to their house they saw an ambulance outside, the boys decided to check out whats going on. They saw two body bags containing one body each. And to their tragedy, their mother and father died of murder

    At that time, Jack thought of why anyone would want to murder his parents. They didnt do anything wrong, they never hurt anyone, they never had any enemies, they were not even rich. All these thoughts were always inside his head.

    After their parents death, they were both forced to live in an orphanage until a rich man, Jason Hummingburg, adopted them. Jason was a president of a company called Burgcrop, which was famous for selling high-tech pokemon products. They both ended up living with him just outside Goldenrod City in Johto. John became interested in the company while Jack focused more on becoming a pokemon trainer studying the ways of pokemon, and at the same time trying to find the murderer of his parents. But it was no use since the murderer was no longer in town. The only way to find him was to start the journey.

    On the twins tenth birthday, Jack was excited about being a pokemon trainer. He and John were at a park staring at the pond, knowing with sadness that Jack would have to leave the next day to start his journey, while their Lavitars played with each other.

    Yes, Jack?
    Do you remember the day our parents died?
    Ive been trying to forget that but go on
    Do you know what Im gonna do? Im going to find that creep and take him down, just like he did to ma and pa. For the both of us.
    John became shock at Johns announcement. Jack! No!
    I dont want you to hurt anyone! I wont let you leave if youre going to do that! I dont want you to risk your life against this guy, even if he is a creep! Weve lost mum and dad already! Please, I dont want to lose you either. Dont you understand?

    Jack became silent at Johns words about losing him. Jack knew that John felt the same way he did, but he didnt want to risk himself in case he gets killed too, His brother would be missing him. After all, Jacks body and size wasnt strong enough to go against anyone.

    Plus, if you act like him, John continued. You would become him.

    Jack became speechless of what John said.

    Promise me, brother
    It took a while for Jack to respond. Alright, then.

    John puts his hand on Jacks shoulder, hoping that Jack would keep his promise.
    Sorry, about the yelling.
    Jack began to sob a little. Its alright. You had to say something.

    Later, they were called to blow out the candles of their birthday cakes. They came running to a table filled with food and there were two cakes in front of them with candles on top.

    John closed his eyes and made a wish. He blew out the candles while Jack stared at the candles. He didnt feel like celebrating at that time. Everyone got worried about him. His foster father Jason and John knew why Jack had that sad look on his face, but with different reasons. Jason walked over to Jack.

    Listen, Jack, said Jason. If you dont want to go on your pokemon journey, then you dont have to.
    I do want to, Jack responded. Im just thinking about something.

    Jason realised what Jack was talking about. Ah I know its hard for you. But let me tell you something, as long as you keep your mum and dad in your heart, they will always be there for you. Okay? Make a wish

    Jason backed away from Jack. Jack made a wish. His wish was to find the murderer of his parents one day. Then he blew out the candles

    The next day

    Jack was getting prepared to set on his pokemon journey. Lavitar was sitting on his bed, watching his trainer getting ready. Jack chose his Lavitar to be his first pokemon. This Larvitar has been at Jacks side since Jack was four years old, and Larvitar was a baby back then.

    Todays the big day. Are you ready? Jack asked with a smile.
    Larvi! Larvitar replied cheerfully.

    Jack was about to leave when John entered the room.

    Jack, I want to give you this before you go.

    John handed Jack a photo showing that was showing a picture of them with their real parents before they died. Jack had a tear running down his face.

    John, I
    Its a little something to keep your spirits up, to remind you that youre never alone.
    Thanks, bro.

    Later, Jack, John and Jason walked outside the mansion, where a lot of people were waiting for Jack. They all knew Jack had to leave home at some level, they all cheered for Jack, saying

    Well miss you, Jack!
    All the best, Jack!
    You can do it, Jack!

    John was right. Everyone that Jack knew and loved in life will always be beside him, believing in him also.

    Thanks, everybody.

    Jack walked through the crowd and walked into a whole new adventure, along with his Larvitar.

    Your brothers a brave man, my son, said Jason. And one day, hell become a strong man.
    Thanks, dad John replied tearfully.
    More coming!!
    So, what do you think so far?
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