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Old April 2nd, 2010 (8:14 AM).
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You just crushed my pure, pokemon addicted, eleven year old heart. I hope your proud.

Seriously though, this is a great story. Really toughes me. Like Redstar said, you handle the point of view amazingly. Redstar also pointed out the trainer calling out the pidgeot at the beginning is a bit confusing.

I'm going to go get my FireRed game now, and say that I'm sorry.
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