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Old April 16th, 2010 (1:14 PM).
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    Join Date: Nov 2008
    Location: 'Merica
    Gender: Male
    Posts: 82
    Um. I'm new here and this is my first post.

    When I start a New Game:

    -I think your game needs some music.
    -Your punctuation needs some work.
    -I wasn't able to take any other Pokemon other than Treeko. After I chose it, it allowed me to take Torchic.
    -Your home town is called West City but the sign by the Trainer's Union said West Town.
    -In West City, you can see a black area in the bottom-right corner
    -I can walk through part of the PokeMart in West City
    -I can walk through almost every building in West City
    -You spelled inauguration wrong.
    -Capitalization
    -I can't go into the Teleporter room.

    When I Choose Continue
    -The levels in the cave are too high



    It needs a lot of work.