Thread: [Demo] Pokémon Nightmare
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Old April 18th, 2010 (3:07 PM).
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    Thought I should point out, the Topic title is mispelled as "Nghtmare" instead of "Nightmare". As for the project, it seems interesting enough, but it lacks plot. I read through it, and there are a lot of plotholes. You should re-read it yourself and fix it. I'll point out what's missing if you me to.