Thread: [Pokémon] Pokémon: The Almia Conspiracy
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Old April 25th, 2010 (1:44 PM).
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    @valentine, Thank you for that constructive criticism. I do write it in Word first, and copy it over. That introduction to Chapter One that you did was amazing. Can I use it? And when he was heading to Vientown, I did think about putting that he was attacked by a Staraptor, but I couldn't find a way to fit it in. I really couldn't think of any way to put anything in between.

    I'm starting the second chapter!
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