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Old June 8th, 2010 (10:01 PM).
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    Do you know how difficult it is to read your posts seriously when there's an old man's butt wiggling in my face?

    This has been bothering me: "summary". "Summery" is like the season.

    First thing you should probably consider is to not rush your plotting – it applies to writing, and should apply to your plotting.
    You have this line twice in "How To Come Up With the Plot" and "The Plotting Itself". idk. That bothered me as well.

    Yes, I'm picky.

    But aside from those nitpicks there, I can't think of anything to add/take out/clean up with those posts.

    btw, anyone know about the resource list Dagzar was collecting? I'd like something to replace Elite Overlord LeSabre's thread before I de-sticky it.
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