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Old July 4th, 2010 (12:32 PM).
KingNerd64 KingNerd64 is offline
     
    Join Date: Jul 2010
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    Very good so far

    One spelling mistake which I found - putting a 'h' infront of air making it hair.

    Also, what are the numbers for ?

    Perhaps you cold do a mid-battle flack-back about her more 'special' pokemon who she has a bond with and she brings them out onto the field ?

    Keep up the good work :]
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