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Old July 22nd, 2010 (4:36 PM).
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Originally Posted by Poeman View Post
I thought of instead of arguing how easy it was and complaining, I would show you how easy it is.

around 5 minutes in MSPaint, and it makes more sense than yours
Your comments have a...demeaning air about them. Sort of an "I rock, you suck" feeling ._.;;. And that's besides the fact that he already said he's going to do that, so it's sort of funny you say "I thought I would show you how easy it is." Yeah, he knows, buddy.

Also, I just noticed in the screencap with the tent [exterior], you have a typo, Avatar. It's "weary," not "weiry." A few punctuation and spacing errors too, but there probably hasn't been a spelling/grammar check yet, so no need to nitpick on something that isn't the final project. Maybe you should run the dialogue through spellcheck/grammarcheck on Word or something? Or just get a new team member to do it [GrammarNazi position].
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